Amore Immortale

"Mom, I'm going to Jim's house. I'll be back later." I yelled as I walked out of my front door. Jimmy lived on the same street as me about seven houses down. His parent's were never home, so he was free to leave anytime he wanted to. I noticed something weird though as I walked towards Jimmy's house. There was a car in the driveway.1

I'd never seen the car before and it certainly wasn't Jimmy's parent's new car or anything. I hurried my pace to reach his front door.2

I openned the door and rushed in his house. The next thing I know, I was laying face down on the floor. I had tripped over something, actually more like someone. I looked behind me and stood up quickly. I noticed Jimmy sitting on his couch with a weird expression on his face. I looked at the person I had tripped over. She was sitting on the ground smiling up at me. 3

I scoffed and turned to my best friend. Accusingly I said, "Who is she Jimmy?" 4

He looked from the girl to me and back to the girl. "Well, uh," he stuttered. "She's uh, Annabelle."5

I put my hands on my hips. My mom always told me I looked liked Tinkerbell when I was mad, because I was small and pixie-like. That always made me even madder. 6

I looked at this Annabelle girl out of the corner of my eye. She was gorgeous. She had long, straight black, almost blue, hair. Her eyes were extremely blue, just like mine. She was pale, just like Jimmy, and she had blood red lips. Annabelle stood up, and she was tall and thin, just like a model. Her clothes, I noticed were perfect, designer brand everything.7

"Hello Rosaline, I'm Annabelle. It's a pleasure to finally meet you," She said. Her voice was silky, and I almost lost her words in her voice.8

"Uh, what do you mean finally?" I asked.9

She chuckled lightly, "Jimmy only talks about you, all day and all night. Actually, he was just talking about you."10

I looked down at my old, beat up flip flops across from Annabelle's perfect, black heels. My face flushed a red deeper than a tomato. "Really?" I asked quietly.11

"Yes," Jimmy said in a whisper.12

I ignored the giggle that was rising in my throat; I still needed to figure out who this Annabelle chick was.13

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Author notes

It took forever to think of another name. haha, XD
Hopefully this is a good story. This is the most fun I've had writing a story. I love it. =] Sorry if there are any errors; I only edit it as I write it and then right before I write the next chapter.
So, thanks for reading!

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