Sera - a profile

First Name: Sera1

Age: 70, appears 17. 2

Gender: Female3

Species: Angel4

Bodily Appearance: Sera is a slightly smaller than normal 17 year old, who can just be described as Angelic. Well, thats because she is, but still! She has bright blue eyes and wavy blonde hair. The most stunning thing about her are her bright white feathery wings. 5

Origin: Sera's origin is to be discovered later in the novel/s so I don't want to give it away. She decided that she wanted to hunt down the trouble-makers, and she wants to be the best at what she does.6

Love Interest: Although she doesn't know it yet, Damion. Shh. She's a little obsessed with him, while he's obsessed with her. 7

Likes & Dislikes: Sera hates troublesome Vampires and Werewolves, and anything else that just causes problems. She likes her friend Anna, and the life she's created. 8

Virtues: She's an Angel. That pretty much speaks for itself. Kind, considering, peaceful, nice, patient. Yet somehow she's not overly Angelic to the point of annoying. 9

Vices: Her soon to be obsession for Damion. 10

Ambition/Desire: To get rid of all the bothersome folks, that threaten innocent souls.11

Conflict: She's an angel, Damion's a Daemon. Simple. 12

Vocation/Calling: Hunter of the troublesome. 13

Additional Notes: You may notice that I spell Angels, Daemons, Vampires, and Werewolves capitalized. That's just the way my novel is. Also, Daemon is NOT misspelled. Thanks much. 14

Sera is quite an interesting character to write. She's so sure of herself, yet she can break at any moment.15

Sample Scene:16

It was the first time in weeks I could relax. Now that I didn't feel watched all the time, it was much easier to just sit and not move. Although I'm sure this experience has left me with many habits I would not have otherwise picked up on. I might have lost my mind if not for Anna. 17

I would probably forever check all the locks twice, even three times. I would always check who's behind or to the side of me while walking down the street. I would always keep at least one light on. These thoughts scared me. The nightmares still haunted me, and, of course, the habits will remain. 18

I didn't want to have to do these things, but the habits are hard to break. I never expected that a Vampire could do this to me, much less a Daemon. To my mind, they were always just bothersome flies, a temporary annoyance. Little, even. Never such a danger. 19

Never again. 20

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Author notes

Last time I'm attempting this. Im tired. The contest hates me.

Warning: Written late at night.

Good night.

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  • tallblondie Greeters member
    September 19

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    Thank you for entering the contest 'Novels - Your Character' - I hope the contest has helped you understand your character better.

    Interesting character. I like how you've made Sera 'angelic' but also humanistic in her thoughts and motivations. The sample scene didn't give me much, but I did see into her thought processes.

  • bowmore bill silver member
    July 12
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    Please change either the background or the lettering as it is very hard to read.

    • seems fine to me. Theres always the "remove background" opition to the right of the story if it bugs you.


  • Trillian
    July 1
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    Heh, nice. Gives me a better mental image =)