-PREFACE- 1
I officially hate science, I thought to myself, feeling suddenly tight in my newest pair of jeans. The tv flickered shyly against the wall, dim and hardly trying to enlighten the room. I leaned back in a shattered attempt of comfort, feeling as though my belly was swelling. “Got-damn.” I muttered, angered by my stomach’s swollen form. I rubbed my belly in vain, wishing that a needle or sharp object would resolve this problem. In utter defeat, I release the clasp on my jeans and again feel my belly expand outwards a bit. 2
I lean back again, ignoring the utter darkness of the night. “What are you doing?” She asks softly, taking a shy seat beside me. I’m not sure if she’s embarrassed or attracted to me at this point. My shoulders relax as she nears me, tenderized by her presence, as I always am. 3
“I’m...trying to breath.” I say, in a dark voice as I pat my swollen belly. A smile cross over her lips, grinning widely and over-exaggerating her precious dimples. “Stop laughing at me!” I smirk, drawing myself closer regardless of my...Obstacle. I feel the baby move within me and I lean back. Excited, frightened and tempted by the newest symptom of my experiment. It’s going to be a long male pregnancy.
Author notes
I looked up all the stuff and am being backed up by science, -smirks- Cos I just couldn't go with the regular buttsex route. Not that I have a problem with that. I just wanted mine to be somewhat more credible.
Main Dude:
Hayden Gavins
Main Girl:
Ashlyn Stevens-Gavins
Summary:
Hayden gets pregnant because Ashlyn's body has an abnormal immune system and attacks the embro once it has been concieved.
The science behind Hayden's male pregnancy is the condition called Ectopic Pregnancy:
What is an ectopic pregnancy?
In a normal pregnancy, a fertilized egg travels through a fallopian tube to the uterus. The egg attaches in the uterus and starts to grow. But in an ectopic pregnancy, the fertilized egg attaches (or implants) someplace other than the uterus, most often in the fallopian tube. (This is why it is sometimes called a tubal pregnancy.) In rare cases, the egg implants in an ovary, the cervix, or the belly.
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Comments
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That is really interesting, almost scary. But I really like it. It is a good piece of writting, and I really want to read the rest.
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This sounds interesting. Good job with all the research. That's what make a story well written.
I loved how you said "The tv flickered shyly agaisnt the wall." I liked that persona.
I'm not sure if you planned it like this, but I had confusing at the beginnning, trying to figure out who the characters where. Everything was summed up in the Authors Notes.
It was a suprise for me to find out it's actually a guy going through the pregnacy and not a girl. This should be very interesting to read and I can't wait to read more of this.
Keep Writting,
armysinger
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