Single Line

i wrote a line
and lost it in a moment
expecting it to follow me on
to some place or time
when then i would let go
ready to be alone1

i lost my life line
the one that kept me going
and strong
that let me believe in my surroundings
as if they believed in me2

i gave up my tie to the world
to seek out death
because i had been disappointed
in more than myself3

im on a fault line
waiting to decided
where i am headed
or whether i should just stay back
from what will run into me
as i wait in the way4

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