Leaving You

The tears shed,
Sight to see you go,
Fear of dread,
Never let you slow.1

Your futures await,
In a path not walked.
For you to create,
A path to be walked.2

Excellence intact,
You, as I will be fine,
That is a fact,
Of our design.3

Too many years,
We've known each other.
Thus the tears,
Not wanting another.4

Hugs and kisses,
She misses,
The wonderful wishes,
She once held.5

One more year,
With our friends,
Would save a tear,
Until it ends.6

The tears shed,
Row on row,
Looks ahead,
Never let you go.7

- We may be leaving each other, and our past. But what we find ahead, will forever last.

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Normanby 2008. Never wanted it to end.

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  • Shadow-Kissed
    June 27, 2008

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    This is really good, but all of your work is so..no surprise there. WELL DONE, good meaning behind the words.

    beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.