"You're as close as it gets without touching me..."1
A kiss, a hug, a dance. None of it is real. The keys are pressed on the board or drummed out of the numbers. A typo could lead to false misery, false happiness, or a non-existent memory. Too much time has passed this way...there's no way to know how much is intended. She says nothing but the love is real. So why do these stupid asteriks and hyphens make me blush so much??!!!
Constructive Criticism Appreciated
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This is really good and detailed! I love the beginning, it really drags me in.You did a great job writing this. I hope to read more. The metaphors where great, like the typo thing.
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