She looked into his coal black eyes, knowing it would be the last time she would she him. Her bright blue eyes swam with tears as he kissed her good bye. She watched as he was engulfed by darkness as the earth surrounded him. When she could see him no more, she turned around. As the clouds parted she was greeted by a bright light.
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she should be see in first sentence? is this the beginning of something? It was very detailed in a short amount of words. Brought forth emotion and left me wanting to know what happened. Very good.
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