Innocent Fun

I mustn't do anything to hurt you1

I don't even know why I think of it2

My mind is starting to become a zoo3

I don't even know how this fire got lit4

I just can't put gum in your flowing hair5

Or put worms in that delicious sandwich6

I just cannot hide your things in my lair7

Or call you in a crowd and shout, BAD WITCH!!!8

Doing all of those things is just nasty9

I hope you never do that in your life10

Don't be glad about ruining tasty11

Things that can easily cut you like a knife12

Please forgive me of the things I have done13

It was just a little innocent fun

Author notes

This is a sonnet. I skipped a space before that last 2 lines because they are both supposed to be indented. I am not allowed to submit it that way though.

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  • sport-gurl-101
    July 4, 2008
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    u totally love sonnets don't u this was good the wording was good write more "innocent fun" things

    beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.


  • Reaver Greeters member
    June 24, 2008
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    Great job! Enjoyed the way you worded this...very nice to read.