“Plenty for Julian”
Part Four 1
“Brian,” My Uncle sounded watching as my father trudged through the door, throwing his briefcase by the dining room door.2
My father always worked late hours on the weekends. Most of the time it drove my mother insane. That was of course until the paychecks came rolling in. 3
Now my mother was no gold digger but as soon as my father waved around that little paper slip of joy all the frustration my mother had built up over the weeks was eased by the weeknights away in luxury hotels or the odd weekend at the local, exotic spa with her country-club friends.4
Tonight had been no different and it showed in his weary, tired eyes; his smile barely showing any excitement at all.5
I could tell he had been kept in the dark that my mother had sprung it on his as well. There was something about the way he glared at my mother that reassured my suspicions. That and the look he gave my Uncle as they grasped each others hands in a well deserved hand shake pulling each other in for a good “Old country” man hug.6
“Hello all,” my father said trying to keep the annoyance from his voice. “How are we all this evening?”7
I looked around as everyone shared their thoughts, talking about my relatives journey; my father pulling up a chair beside my Uncle and waited patiently for my mother to bring him his dinner.8
“So how long will you be staying then?” he asked taking the dinner plate from my mothers hands, kissing her gratefully on the lips.9
If there was one thing I admired about my parents it was that there was so much love between them even when they bickered, it was never intended as cruelty more so to assure that things were alright between them and that the household was running Smoothly.10
My Aunt who had cleaned her plate within Ten minutes of my mother placing it in front of her, wiped her salt-stained lips shaking her head in a manner in which made me frightened it would roll of the safety of her neck.11
“Oh no not us at all Raine will be staying with you we just stopped to drop her of and have a bite to eat. We thought it might be nice for Julian and Raine to become reacquainted with each other and what better chance, no time like the present. I hope you don't mind the short notice Brian. We did not even decided ourselves till a few days ago when the cruise booking was available.”12
My father immersed himself in concentration as he sliced through the tender roast meat my mother had cooked to near perfection. He took a forkful and brought it to lips, shaking his head once again. 13
My whole family looked like a bunch of bobble heads at this present time, and while it was amusing to watch I knew my father was trying his best to not let my Aunt grate his nerves. I couldn't blame him even though it had been quiet some time since I had last been in her presence it was hard to forget her irritating personality that never seemed to grow on you.14
“Never... It's never a problem there is plenty of room for Two in Jule's bedroom.”15
I shuddered with heated stimulation my feet digging into the carpet.16
There is plenty of room for Raine In Julian's room...in Julian's arms... there is plenty of room in Julian's bathroom... there is plenty of room for Rains aggressively, sexy, touch.17
I tried to push the images away. Raine draped in nothing but a Black chemise nightgown, high over her slender shoulders. Her hair wild, tangled around her shoulders hiding her breasts like leaves to Eve.18
“Go away,” I whispered begging with my inner voice my inner desires that were disturbing me to the point I no longer felt comfortable in the presence of my family.19
I looked up seeing all eyes on me all eyes except those of my hated cousin.20
“Stupid flies, bloody annoying little shits,” I said roughly, pretending to swat away the imaginary insects; trying to cover my ass from suspicion.21
“May I be excused?” I asked my father feeling slightly nauseous. This infatuation was starting to get at me, fast. 22
My father nodded placing his hand on mine.23
“Are you feeling alright Jules? You look a tad pale do you want to go lie down?” 24
I nodded giving my father an indication that I was fine, but needed to take a breath, to come to terms with the reality of my feelings to extinguish them before they got the better of me.25
“I think I might just go outside for some fresh air.”26
My Aunt smiled I knew that smile even after many years that was a smile of a chance to palm Raine of so that she could bicker and gossip about us kids without us being in their presence. 27
“Rain would love to accompany you outside wouldn't you Raine? It will give you girls a great chance to catch up properly,” My aunt stated resting her hand on Raine's shoulder. 28
There was no right answer too that question and everyone at the table knew that, even if they chose not to say anything. Once my aunt had made up her mind it was her way or the highway unless you wanted to road of a long and painful lecture and by the looks of it no one was willing to withstand the trauma of it.29
For the first time since I had made a start at a confession I so much confusion about, Raine looked up from her plate hey eyes fixated directly in mine melting me instantly into a sweet state of corruption.30
Raine shook her head firmly standing up to her mother. She sure had gust to do that for sure, not even my grandfather who was built like steel dared to pick with her.31
“I am sure Julian does not want me bothering her,” she argued with a certain urgency in her voice.32
My Aunt frowned her eyes scanning Raine.33
“Nonsense love, Julian would love your company and it will give us adults a chance to catch up. There is nothing to be afraid of she won't bite I can guarantee she doesn't have it in her.”34
How kind she was. I could not face this, this time alone forced time alone. I wanted to walk outside the front door and run, run from it all.35
Instead I faced the dining room door unwilling to look at my family anymore.36
“I will be outside if anyone needs me,” I stated reaffirming my decision.37
“Go on Raine,” I heard my Aunt demand her voice sounding so much like my mothers that it felt like she was the one demanding me, pushing me into something I really did not want to do, only if it was me I would fight my mothers wishes.38
“Fine,” Raine sighed, “Wait for me Julian,” she beckoned with fear in her voice.39
I did not wait long. I felt her footsteps behind me and began making my way to the door, my steps becoming quicker.40
“Hay Julian I said wait up freak,” she growled letting her hand fall clumsily down my back; compelling me to stop.41
I felt everything in my body erupt, shuddering, trembling. Shaking, shifting under her touch. My blood heated, melting, burning an inferno though my body, through my veins arousal flowing frighteningly through me, withering all my confidence to that of sheer terror.42
I did not turn around to damn afraid of what might escape my lips or what my body might do in reaction to her toying, touch. I let the feeling surround me brewing, lingering, growing stronger as I opened the front door stepping out onto the front step.43
Raine followed behind me, so close that I felt my body become temporarily stiff frozen like the statue that stood lifeless beside our mail box.44
I heard the door close the sound making my body jolt from the statue like position.45
Raine was beside me her breathing heavy and frustrated in the warmth of the night. 46
I could feel her eyes on me as her hand brushed against mine. I closed my eyes not knowing weather it had been done on purpose or with clumsiness again. Regardless I pulled back my hand flinching with embarrassment.47
I inhaled withering with the strong desire to kiss her, first slowly then passionately feeding of her fullness. I took the strength to face her my eyes not being able to look at her directly.48
“Julian” she whispered, “ What are we going to do.”
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Oohhhhh, what will they do now. I think they are both feeling something new. Will Jule's take the hint that Raine likes her in that way too. Will there family find out what is going on with the two of them.
This is very good. I'm waiting for what is next.

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And the plot thickens!! It sounds as if Raine sort kinda returns the feelings or doesn't want Julian to get hurt/shunned. I think you did a very good job with the description of the emotions and family. I especially like how the father and mother don't "fight" but share a silent communication between them with looks and not mean words. It's intimate and romantic. I'm off to read more!


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A given look can tell another person everything.
In Paragraph 16, I noticed the author didn't change the storyline or frame of the story, yet the narration of the story went from what the dad was sharing, to what Jules was thinking.
The discussion @ the dinner table of what the realitives were thinking, and the determination of the Aunts firm suggestions and how the family and even the kids reacted to it, was very well done.
It was very cute to read what was going through Jules mind & body at the end, and then the mysterious question that ends the reader in their tracks as the story comes to an end. Raine whispers : “What are we going to do?”
I say If Chapter 5 comes out, wether its a story of passion or a story of teasing, ill be a reader that will take the time and read what you wrote.
Thank you Prodigious
-Hismercy


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Okay! I command that you write more, now! I am so very anxious. So, does she like Julian too? I wanna know dammit! Who cares if they're related?! The passion that can be felt between the two is... powerful. You're off to a wonderful start here hun. Please, pretty please write more soon!


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oh my god more damnit!
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I enjoyed this, very nice and very well written.
I found some typos but I think its fair to Im you instead.
Loved it!!
-missi


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