Straining and pushing1
Concentration at its peak2
Ah, such sweet relief.
Author notes
A senryu is the same as a haiku except haiku's are supposed to be about nature. Senryu's are about humans and are usually meant to be comical (like this one is)
A contest entry
- I SURPRRRY AT YOUR FAB HAIKU. by brittanyshanae.
350 points, ended July 5, 16 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next story in this contest, remove from contest - Amuse and Bemuse me by callthexylophone.
350 points, ended July 8, 16 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Heeh, That was funny.
For just a Haiku, it had so much funniness in it.
It was beautiful!
Keep it up, forevea!
VH -
I bow before you great haiku master.
You not only amused me, you kept it short, sweet, and easy to repeat.
Good luck in my contest, my shining star!
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This is quite possibly the best thing I've ever read.
Thanks, and good luck!
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