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On Sunday's you dress up for church,23
but you always wear such beautiful things,45
like your cute khaki capris,67
your bracelets and your rings.89
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But what is more beautiful1213
than the things you wear1415
is whats in your heart,1617
that you really care.1819
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You became an Aunt2223
the day that I was born,2425
but now it is a part of your name,2627
a pair of jeans well worn.2829
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You have seen me laugh and cry,3233
through these thirteen years,3435
you've made me smile so many times,3637
you've been there to wipe away so many tears.3839
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Your house is filled with memories4243
and new are on the way,4445
I know I can call you for help at anytime,4647
and on any day.4849
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The definition5253
of an Aunt like you5455
is alot like the definition5657
of the word perfect too! 58
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its sweet its along the lines of a perfect b-day gift to any aunt
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You should actually give this to your aunt.
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this piece was really cute. i think your aunt is really cool
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Aw, this was such a cute poem and I really liked it! It was so innocent and fun. You had some really nice metaphors and it made me laugh. My only itches were: "Sunday's" should be "Sundays", "whats" should be "what's", "alot" should be "a lot", and in the last line, you should probably add quotation marks around the word "perfect" (<< like that).
But this was such great little poem! I'm sure your aunt would love to read it. Thanks for sharing it with us!
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This almost made me cry becasue I can't relate it at all. My aunt lives half way across the cuntry and the only memories I have of her was when she was a very difficult teenager. Even now I can't have any connection to her...
Either way the poem.
I liked the poem it is well writen. The clothing metaphore is very nice and you carried the entire poem through masterfully. A wonderful poem, really. A good write. Three aplauses from me.
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