A definition of loss in a single sentence.

Loss is love intensified by absence.

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I'm female.

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  • Taylor Renee
    July 17, 2008
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    Oh, I'm so dumb!

    I'm really sorry! I forgot one SENTENCE was an option

    Sorry about that, I see it

    Thanks so much and good luck!

  • Taylor Renee
    July 17, 2008
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    I'm not aware I had six words as an option, but you know what?

    Whatever.

    I really liked this one. The wording was perfect, as it needs to be in these entries.

    And this is very true.



    Thank you so much for entering my contest, and I wish you the best of luck!

    Great work!

    xoxo
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    Tay


  • Shadow-Kissed
    June 23, 2008
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    it's so simple and so true. Your sentence sums it all up. Well Done!

    beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.