You’re my escape;1
my friend when life is too much to take.2
Even though we haven’t talked face to face, 3
it feels like I know you; 4
for you're so kind and true. 5
We make a connection from miles away, 6
We bond in a different place and time;7
always on each other’s minds. 8
Will we ever meet?9
Will I ever see you smile at me?10
I have no idea,11
the future is the thing that I can’t foresee.12
But I want our friendship to stay; 13
to never change, come what may. 14
Author notes
I was just thinking about my friend, Dave(davidc), who I met on Story Write, and I wrote this.
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What do you think?
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thanks 4 ur comment bout mi random poem I like urs 2 it's like a poem u should read on a sunny day in the park.
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thanks Lex.
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great poem! One thing that humans just cant live without is friends, and you picked a very good way to show appreciation of your friend.
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Hey, this is great.
This is an earnest expression of gratitude for the good people we meet online. I really enjoy the people I've gotten to know and it's nice to see you expressing it in a simple and heartfelt way. Such things are best simply spoken from the heart, which is exactly what you did here. I like the genuine feeling that pours from this. Good job.
Just one suggestion: maybe put a comma: "to never change, come what may..."
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Plumeister
Thanks for the comment. I like meeting people and making friends. -
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Hey, me too.
It's a pleasure to make your acquaintance and I hope this not to be the last of many pleasant exchanges.
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Line 8...
I am sure you meant 'minds', instead of mines, which tend to blow up if you fondle them, smiles....
That distant friendship drew 'pen-pals' from around the world in an earlier time before the internet and fulfilled a need, as do distant friends here and there.
Well done, nicely expressed and thank you for the visit...I have not been around much of late, a moderator bit me...grins...
Amicus...
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this is a very true way of expressing your thoughts about a SW friend, and I hope they will be there for you as much as you are for them. I am your friend to stay. I feel the same way about my friends here and further more every where. keep up the great writtings
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Lolololololo
Yes...this poem it SO true. Who doesn't wanna meet their SW friends in real life? I wish I could....
Well, great poem! 
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