I am too diferent

I look like you1

I act like you2

I feel like you3

But I am diferent4

Mother tells me not to worry5

Father treets the thought like I'm mad6

Brother tells me I'm mad7

I tell me their right8

But the feeling remains9

I am diferent10

Grandmother tells me that I am diferent but not as much as I think11

Freinds think its a game12

You think I'm crazy13

I agree with you14

But the feeling remains15

I am diferent16

When I look at myself in the miror I look like you17

The miror must lie18

When I look at my hands they move slowly, forcefully, unrealisticaly19

When I look at my feet they are strange, mutated, wrong20

When I look back at my reflection I see a deamon, a monster, me21

I am too diferent

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  • VioletConcept
    August 11, 2008
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    Father treets the thought like I'm mad

    Brother tells me I'm mad...

    I tihnk on that line the second one, you should change the last word. Maybe change it too something else, because you are repeating right after you just said the word.

    Besides that, The poem is really good.

    Keep it up, dude,

    VH


  • RegalAngel
    June 26, 2008
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    ...wow... that describes me... thats creepy!