Darklight

I see darkness,1

I see light,2

I see darkness where should be light3

and light where should be darkness.4

I see green,5

I see red,6

I see green blood and green roses,7

red grass and red leaves.8

This the darklight world.9

Where once was a city now is rocks,10

Where once was feilds now is waistland,11

Where once was blue sky now is storm12

and everywhere,13

Everything,14

Every...15

All except the tree under which i made my home,16

All the rocks that were city,17

All the sand that was farmland,18

All the storm clouds that will never go away,19

Is in dakness.20

I see the darkness,21

I see the light,22

I see the darkness where should be light23

and the light where should be the darkness.24

I see the greens,25

I see the reds,26

I see the greens where should be the reds27

and the reds where should be the greens.28

this is the darklight world.29

should i chose to accept it or not.

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  • Forgotten Anomaly
    June 22, 2008

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    Hey, I like this alot. its very descriptive and well writen. The darklight world huh, sounds interesting. You describe things wonderfully for so few words. A wonderful poem!