I sat down to stare at the stars,
And wondered how they got so far;
I looked toward the moon,
Found no man or goon,
But realized it had lots of scars.
Author notes
In 6th grade, my class had to make up one of each kind of poetry, and I really grew fond of this limerick that I created.
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Comments
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Wow, that is short but very very pretty. I enjoyed it, great job.
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Awww I love it <2 'Tis cute and interesting yet sad. Perfect =)


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i love limericks!
and this background, eez cute.
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lol .
cool and thought provoking.
Mind if I write a twin? -
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Sure, go ahead.
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Well, it isnt great but it isnt nothing either. Maybe take this and make it into something more?
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