What Life Can Do

Life comes at you fast (5), Don't let sorrow break you down (7), Let your life go free!(5)

A contest entry

I wrote this on my PSP so that's why it looks like this. This is my Haiku!

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  • JESSYstarzSMILZ
    July 17
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    i luv it its so happy in the end, FREEEEEEEEEEEE......lol


  • I-Love-Renji
    June 22
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    you are very talented. you should win!


  • brittanyshanae
    June 22

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    You get applause for writing this from your psp. I used to do EVERYTHING from my psp, then I finally stopped having to share a computer my sister.

    BUT THIS IS ABOUT FAB HAIKU.
    I like the message of this poem.
    Thanks and good luck!