kama sutra touch (poem)

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her skirt
a deep earth ochre
surrenders to the breeze3

a flower nods, nods
bee sparkles away 4


now it is my turn5

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  • V l
    July 30, 2008

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    This was well writen short but very good. Who says that everything has to be writen like a novel this was amazing and I really enjoyed it.