I Want to Hurt You

I want to be able to carve into your skin, make you cringe knowing you wont make a sound or complaint.1

I need to be able to feel your hate coming through. 2

But I have always wondered what the hate is for, for who, for what?3

You know i want to hurt you, but you do not stop me, you foolish thing. 4

Everyday you walk as if you have something to be proud of, as if someone wants you. 5

Face it child, your a whore and you cant even handle the attention. 6

I want to be able to hurt you as deeply as thourghly as the blood that runs in you veins. To hear you choke back whatever fears you have.7

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Oh how deep self loathing gets someone.

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  • Drago
    June 22, 2008
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    Its deep and very good. Keep working hard. 1 and 7 are the best lines.