You are Everything-Chapter 1 Memories

"What do you mean by that?!" I screamed at Justin. "What do you mean 'it's not working out?' What did I do?!" Justin looked surprised at my reaction. "Erik, calm down it's not that bad!" He yelled. "You need to ger over the fact that I don't love you anymore!" He shouted even louder. "Get over the fact that you don't love me anymore?" I shouted!1

I started to run outside. As soon as I got to the street I was soaked. Justin followed me outside. "Leave me alone!" I shouted. "Don't come near me again!" Justin yelled, "Don't be this way! Don't be an idiot, and get inside. It's the middle of winter and you don't have a coat!" I payed no attention and ran across the street. Two cars were coming that I hadn't noticed. One swerved to avoid me, and the cars crashed. Glass flew everywhere. One piece of the glass flew right at me. It cut my cheek so badly that I fell to the ground.2

Justin saw this and ran the other way. I thought he was going to call for an ambulance. I was wrong. He got in his car and drove away. "Justin, you coward!" I screamed. I got up and stumbled a bit, but hurried to the phone on the side of the building. I called 911, and when they appeared they treated my wound. Luckily none of the people were seriously injured.3

"What you did was a very stupid thing!" Scolded my mother. "You could have gotten yourself killed and killed two other people!" I ignored her and walked to my room, slamming the door in her face. I locked it before she got a chance to open it. I had the key with me, so she couldn't open it. I flopped down on my bed and grabbed a picture. A picture of Justin and I. I ripped it apart. 4

My mom didn't know about us. It was a picture of our first kiss, taken on MY digital camera. His brownish-gray hair was a mess. All over the place like usual. His dreamy, icy-blue eyes were open and staring into my dull grey eyes. My brown hair was also a mess, but didn't look as good as his. One of his arms were stretched out to take the picture, but the other was wrapped around my waist. One of my arms were around his waist, and the other through his hair. 5

I looked at the picture a little longer and put it into a drawer. I locked the drawer like usual, but hid the key where I knew I would forget about it. I remembered in my mind that perfect day when we had our first kiss. We had gone for a ride in his rock blue Mustang, with black flames running up and down the hood and the side of his car. He was everything to me. 6

It was the first time I saw his car. It was a beautiful machine. He opened the car door for me and said "Here you go, Erik. You're thrown awaits you." I laughed and replied, "Why, thank you good sir." Jokingly of course. He smiled at me that perfect smile. That was the smile he would always give that made me feel better on a bad day.7

Once I got in, he backed up and took a running start towards his car. He jumped on the hood, and slid across, just barely landing on his feet. I laughed, and he got in the car. "Where would you like to go? We've got the whole world to explore!" I looked at him and answered. "Surprise me, Justin." He got this weird look in his face, and started the engine. I wanted to say something, but I was lost for words. We were silent the whole time.8

I had fallen into a dreamless sleep. It seemed like only seconds until we got to where he was going. I felt his arm brush against mine, and I had woken up. I stared out the window and noticed a huge hill. I couldn't see up it, because I was slouched in my seat. I opened the door and stretched my cramped legs. Justin soon caught up with me, and covered my eyes.9

He led me up the hill, and talked all the while. "I want to show you something amazing." He had said. I just smiled and trusted him. When we got to the top of the hill, I felt him turn me towards him. "Open you're eyes, Erik." I slowly opened my eyes, and stared into his. He pointed and I looked. I was lost for words.10

A giant tree, about the size of seven of me standing side by side, stood there. The tree had bloomed very early. Stunning, pink cherry blossoms covered the tree. One bird chirped very loudly, which brought me back to reality. I looked back at Justin and that's when the spectacular kiss had happened. He looked at me. He had my camera in his hand, which I didn't notice. His face came towards mine, and before I knew it, we were locked into a passionate kiss.11

I was still lost in the memory, when there was a loud knock on the door. I was brought back to reality. "WHAT?!" I yelled. "Dinner time, sweetie." My mother said. "Be down in a second," I grumbled. Great. Rudely interrupted by my mother. I guess I'll go eat dinner, I thought. Oh well. I unlocked my door and headed for the bathroom, waiting for the yelling from my mother...

Author notes

Well, i decided to write this because I have nothing else to write and it was the first thing that popped into my head. I wrote it down, and it seemed good. not done! Also parts of this were based on real things like the kiss. Erik was supposed to be me if u didn't get the messege, and Justin was supposed to be my ex. okay, so tell me you're honest opinions.

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  • stargirl
    July 4, 2008

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    That was sooo good, but i'm so sorry this had to be based on you and your ex. But I do hope you continue


  • stargirl
    June 28, 2008
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    souunds good please continue


  • emo1991
    June 25, 2008
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    yeah really good write more.


    • I-Am-Austin
      July 4, 2008
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      I just finished this capter. go ahead and read the rest if ya want.


  • quicksilver moon
    June 22, 2008
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    Please write more! It looks like a good story


    • I-Am-Austin
      June 22, 2008
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      thank you. I will definitly write more. i'll messege you when i write some more on this.

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