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He looked down into her bright blue sorrowful eyes and watched her fragile heart shatter at his very touch of farewell. His hand that rested on her soft silky cheek fell to the quiet rose of her lips before he walked away, back to his so-called friends.3
He turned back as nonchalantly as he could, pretending to listen to his peers as he watched her walk slowly to Nick - who was standing nearby - her paling eyes on him.4
"So," he heard the soft, unchained melody that was her voice whimper as Nick placed a gentle arm around her trembling shoulders. "You've known him longer." Her pale sapphire eyes met his as she continued, "Was he always this frustrating?"5
"Yes, sweetie, I'm afraid he was."6
She closed her blue eyes to the world as if to stabilize herself. Tears formed on her cheeks as the as the wonderfully blue irises reformed. She drew in a steadying breath and began to walk away at a fast pace. "Carissa!" Nick called.7
"I have to go," she snapped as she turned the corner.8
Nick came over and pulled him aside. "I don't know what in the hell is between you two, but you need to come to your senses."9
"Is that so?" he asked.10
"Yes," Nick stressed. "All she wants is for someone to care for her while she goes through this. She wants you to care. As it is, she has no one."11
"She has you."12
"While she knows that, I'm not the one she's sticking her neck out on a limb for. She needs you. She needs life."13
XxXChristina Marie SiriusXxX14
Author notes
Just one of those random moments that flitter through my head every now and then. 
Funny enough, I'm trying to rid myself of those thoughts so I can get rid of my headaches. Hope you enjoyed it.
What did you think? Please comment!
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Chrissie's stories and poems are alway riveting. That's why I love my sis. She's an awesome poet and I'm jealous being a poet myself. ~Narcissa Leigh~ Chrissie's sister.
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cool, but not my style
wahey cool write chrissie, but i dont really enjoy stories so i dont really no wot 2 say but i like how detailed you were, and well done XxXx from em -
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Beautiful and in story form as well, not a usual typical poetic rhyme scheme...Very good and provokes a deep emotion. I liked this very much. -
This was a good write, especially if is only a flikering thought! I hope this helps your head ache.I wish poetry could help mine!
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Nicely Done
I liked it, thought that it was well done. It is hard to write something without a lead, but you did it very well. My only suggestion is that this line: ""So," he heard the soft, unchained melody that was her voice whimper as Nick placed a gentle arm around her trembling shoulders." be shortened a bit. I thought there was too much going on in one sentance.
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