~Peek Within~

Minds blooming like roses1

aspiring beauty, merging forth from within.2

Flawless captivation fading with time;3

old parchment paper weathered and aged,4

defining vast journeys.5

Long hard roads traveled, painting experiences6

on taunt skin canvases.7

Personalities intermingling;8

gum balls in a jar, colorful and ripe9

for the choosing.10

Inner light shimmering through,11

precipitating happiness,12

cracking the iciest of hearts.13

Libraries of books on a shelf, dusty;14

when open glorious stories to tell,15

illuminating from the depth's of ones being.16

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  • SympatheticMisery
    June 28, 2008

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    Oh, wow...this is so meaningful. I don't think I've ever read something quite like this before. The poem flowed amazingly well, and the spiritual and emotional meaning is very deep. The whole thing, all together, is just a beautiful piece to me.

    I'd wish you good luck for entering my contest, but I highly doubt that you'd even need it. Thank you for entering this beautiful work.