Photograph

I have a photograph of you,1

your eyes are shuttered against the world.2

You seem at peace, a soft3

moment until4

I notice the crease in your brow,5

and the gentle wrinkles 6

playing about your lids as if7

you are breathing too deep.8

Perhaps a sharp ache sears your 9

thoughts or10

jolts you into memory11

and I don’t understand.12

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  • MysticalRayne
    June 27, 2008
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    I really enjoyed this piece best of luck in the contest


  • Envy the Sin
    June 25, 2008
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    The ending seems a bit strange, but it is still a good poem. Good Luck in the contest.