She sat there, watching the blood fall.1
"Why did he do this?" she asked herself.2
Tears fell down her face, she began to cut again.3
She didn't feel the blade against her skin, or the cuts forming.4
She was so hurt that she didn't feel the pain that she wanted.5
"I'm dead..."she whispered.6
More tears fell down her face, things went back, and she was gone.7
He never knew that she cared this much.....until he found her dead....8
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okay this is the beginning of a story that I'm writing, tell me what you think please?
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