Into the dark

Author notes

This is a poem....sorta like a haiku...

A contest entry

• A Little Effort... by Taylor Renee. 225 points, ended July 17, 2008, 19 entries
  Honorable mention
  • next story in this contest, remove from contest

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  SparklingMoonlight
  June 30, 2008
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  I love this... so deep! good job and good luck in the contest you entered!

  
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  Blazing Writer
  June 23, 2008
  
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  Oh, I like it. But the second line is kind of choppy around really urge turn to around and look. I know it's a haiku but maybe something like um... add to before turn so its really urge to turn around I think it gives 11 with that. lol But anyway good haiku.

  
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    NinjaMegami
    June 23, 2008
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    Hey.....

    I know...Sorry it's a bit choppy. And it's an eztended haiku..... ummmm...thanks for the comment.
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  Taylor Renee
  June 21, 2008
  
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  Oh my goodness!
  
  I love it!
  
  It's absolutely something new to my contest, the first one the made me turn around >.<
  
  Thanks! lol. It's creepy, in an amazing way.
  
  I love it.
  
  I love it I love it I love it.
  
  You used the prompt perfectly.
  
  Thank you so much for entering my contest, and I wish you the absolute best of luck!
  
  xoxo
  ♥-
  Tay