stupid toy

I'm just your retarded joy,
whose jokes aren't even funny,
can't pull out of the hat a bunny;
just a retarded joy.1

If it's everything you wanna be,
then everything I'll help achieve;
afterwards, when your thirst is quenched,
you can throw me away in the trench.2

'Cause I'm just your stupid toy,
equipped with hand-me-downs,
one who can't make a sound;
just a stupid toy.3

Forever your stupid toy,
not to be taken seriously;
forever your retarded joy,
who'll only bring you misery.4


I'm forever your stupid toy.

Author notes

tis on my AP too.

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  • iBubbles
    October 5
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    Nice poem you got here :]. it had a little rythmic flow to it, that i found nice. keep writing ;D


  • Laceration Happy
    July 14
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    wow, this was really good, I liked it alot, the words flowed sop flawlessly, amazed, I really am.


  • xMomo
    July 1

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    Very good
    as the other good said good choice of words with the "retarded joy" I'm thinking the last stanza is my favorite part. Poetry is your calling. keep up the good stuff :]


  • callthexylophone
    June 26
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    hmmmmmm.... 'retarded joy?' interesting choice of words lol.
    thanks for entering!


  • Camii
    June 22
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    Nice poem! Ty 4 rating my story. You should write more.

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