Broken- A four word story

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Option: write a four word story

A contest entry

• A Little Effort... by Taylor Renee. 225 points, ended July 17, 2008, 19 entries
  • next story in this contest, remove from contest

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  Bottom-End-Kid
  June 21, 2008
  
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  amazing how you hide so much emotion behind four words. Well done. Good Job

  
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  Taylor Renee
  June 21, 2008
  
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  I absolutely adore this.
  
  And not often is it I use that word.
  
  I love the four word option, because you guys fill it extraordinarily. I left him...again.
  
  That says SO much, and leaves so much for me. Just what I wanted.
  
  Thank you so much for entering my contest, and I wish you the best of luck!
  
  xoxo
  -♥-
  Tay
  

  
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  loyda
  June 20, 2008
  
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  somehow this reminded me of...:

  ...: oops i did it again, i broke your heart! la la la la
  
  hahahhaha but well, IT'S NO LAUGHING MATTER. it's also very incredible how you can make such an elaborate story out of just 4 words!
  
  good luck on that contest