Chapter One: Twisted Squares

Winona was tired. She was tired of the few guys in her life not standing up and being “manly” enough to grab her by the hand and swing her out the door for a date. But most of all, she was tired of falling for guys who clearly were not interested in her or were otherwise blind to the fact that she was. Short of throwing herself onto the ground singing out lyrics of love, which was not going to happen in this lifetime or the next for that matter, she honestly didn’t know what else to do. And this was all before the age of twenty-one. Clearly her love life was over and done with.1

She stared at herself in the mirror.2

“What am I doing with my life? This is so cliché. When did my life become this love story filled drama? I wanted things to be simple and clear, when did it get all screwed up?”3

Oh, but she knew. She knew the exact situation that had lead her down this road. It had been as rocky as all hell and had shown no signs of giving. It was when for the first time in her life, she experienced what she had never experienced before- love. Or well at least the feeling of it.4

It had crept up on her so slowly; she didn’t even have time to notice. Before she could blink she became entrapped in this four-way mess of a square that she didn’t even know exists until all was revealed too late.5

His name was Cameron.6

Author notes

Okay...this is a piece I'm working on. Here's the first part. I figured I better post something up of my works here. I am an inspiring writer its just whenever I wanna write something down I figure it won't be good enough for people to want to read and so I scrap it. But here on this site, I've decided to commit whatever I write. Opinions are more than welcome. There will be more to come....

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  • Reaver Greeters member
    June 19, 2008

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    Never throw anything you write away. Even if you feel others might not like it. It's something,,,no matter what. This was a very good beginning. Short, but very good. Caught my interest and left me wanting more. I'll be looking for further posts Very well done! Keep writing!


  • kitigrl-sparkloholic
    June 19, 2008

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    ya know wats weird,

    my only sw fwend who i really kno in the world of "flesh and blood" is namd cameron, and we got inna fight but i hav a crush on him an my life is relly dramatic now. its summer and he, well, i cant see him livs to far awa


  • kitigrl-sparkloholic
    June 19, 2008
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    it is nice








    blah blah blah


  • ArcticFox
    June 19, 2008

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    Nicely written. I'm curious as to what is going to happen next. In your author's comments, I think you mean aspiring, not inspiring.
    ~Emma