Twisted Ends chpt2

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`Five years later`2

The Ground still damp from yesterdays shower `Errn!-Errn!-Errn!-err!`click`3

"Ender you up?" the voice came from down stairs 4

"Yeah!"5

"well get ready for school! Breakfast is ready when you get down here."6

"O~kay-ah!"7

Grabbing a towel from the closet out side his door, he hurried to the bathroom . Shutting the door, and turning on the shower. The room filled with the a white mist. Fogging the glass till nothing could be seen.Stripping from his boxers, he tested the water then stepped in. a sudden sting, but soon turned into a tranquil sensation. The feel of each droplet as it hits him. He started to nod off but thought better of it and quickly finished.8

Finally, as he came down stairs dressed in chakis and a Blackshirt `(live long, Die strong)` (with a skeleton holding a sword), and black DC shoes. In one hand he held a skateboard, the other his bookbag.9

"Ah your finally ready."10

"Ya, i stubbed my toe on my dresser, when i was getting my clothes. Hey mom can i go over to X's house after school?"11

"As long as you have no homework and you can stay till six no later."12

"cool"13

placing his bag on his back and grabbing a breakfast bar. Ender started to walk towards the door.14

"Don't get hurt!It's still damp from yesterdays rain."15

"ya , later mom"16

"I love you too"17

Stepping out the door. Hearing the sounds of birds as they chirped at the fresh new air. Laying down his board he hurried to his friends, that had just headed out them selves.18

Author notes

This is five years later youll understand as more chapters come and if you read it out of order you may get lost. Ihope you enjoy it.

(plz let me know if theres any thing that can fix or enhance the fell of the story. any ideas will help too)

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  • Schizophrenic angel
    February 3, 2005
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    *ish waiting for next chapter* i want more! MUWAHAHAHAHA!