Poor little Liliam. She was abused harshly by her father. It wasn't techinically her fathers fault. He had schizphrenia, and he thought that his wife and daughter were out to make his life miserable. Poor Liliam came home one day to find that her mother was brutally murdered. Her mother, Krista, was a lovely age of 30. She was still beautiful. Krista had brownish blonde hair and eyes a green shade just above the color of spring grass.1
Liliam found her father stuffing her mothers body in the closet of their 1800's styled bedroom closet. Liliam gaped at her father in horror. She saw the tears in his eyes as he said," Sorry Lili. I didn't mean for this to happen. It wasn't soposed to happen this way. I'm sorry. You saw everything. I can't let you get away knowing what you know."2
"F-father...No please! I promise....We can just have the funeral...I promise I won't say anything!!!" Liliam pleaded. Her father finished disposing of her mothers lifeless body and turned towards Liliam.3
"I'm sorry baby-girl. But this is the way it has to be."4
With one quick motion, Lili's father snapped her neck. It made a sickening sound as Liliams eyes shut and she fell down on the floor in front of her father. Her father began to sob loudly. 5
He put her body right next to her mothers hoping they would be together in the afterlife. Lili's father then hung himself realizing the seriousness of what he had just done; all this, done right in front of the closet.6
To this day, sighting of Lili and her family have been seen around and in my best friends closet....This is true, I swear.7
Author notes
I hope you beleive me, I have aquired this information from a dream. It's up to you whether or not you take this story seriously.
What did you think? Please comment!
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Great work
Aww... how sad. I can't believe he killed his own father and his daughter. I almost cried. You did a great job on this story. You have a great talent in writing.
Keep up the great work.
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I DIDNT KNOW YOU TOLD MY STORY.HUN THE FATHER WASNT SAD AND WHAT HAPPEN TO THE LITTLE BROTHER REMEMBER SLAMMED AGAINST THE WALLS
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Nice work...wow, I'm commenting my own work.
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I truly hope that this is not inspired by actual events. This is very well written. Good work on this.
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This made me cry!!
it is rather disturbing. It was really sad. I have never read anything like it. I can't believe you had a dream about such a frightening sight. I think that this gave me the most chills anything I have read before could have.
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8/10
Well, if you really saw this in a dream, that makes me wonder? Do you have that ability to see things like that? or are these just mere dreams that you have on random, like night mares? Interesting story though, be nice if there was a part 2, maybe some one could move into this house and strange things happen. -
Eerie story. I would be wary around that closet, about midnight. Interesting like a legend with details. B
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