~Loving you~


A force so full of life,1

loving you comes effortlessly.2

My eyes drink in harmony,3

from the depths of your soul.4

When we touch,5

the fire is inextinguishable.6

Every day with you7

is like an everlasting rainbow8

and you my pot of gold.

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I LOVE TIGERS

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  • juhi
    July 2, 2008
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    sweet

    very simple and beautiful poem. good job ,keep it up.


  • Tiger-Lily
    June 18, 2008

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    Lmao, I love tigers too. xD

    Very sweet poem. But I didn't find it remarkable. Too many same "fire/flame" poems around, I guess...O.O

    -H


  • Reaver Greeters member
    June 18, 2008

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    This was really good heavily emotional and well worded. I enjoyed the flow Very wonderful job!