Crissabella stood out since the first day of school. She was the object of all the guys desires and even the girls had to take a step back around her. She always thought everyone lived in different worlds. She began thinking as she sketching in her sketch book sitting on the school banister. As Crissabella began sketching she saw a very handsome man walking pass below on the sidewalk….
Fable walked out the door of the school and walked down the sidewalk holding his black backpack in his hand, his black trench coat covering his whole body, he had been voted prom king for junior year and he didn’t even want to go. Man why me, his thoughts were out the window, and that made him walk into a piece of paper hanging from the roof. “What the heck,” his voice deep and on the verge of cursing.
Crissabella was sketching when the wind picked up and her papers went flying. Crissabella leaned over the banister and tried to catch as many papers as she could reach but was unsuccessful and gasped as one of her papers hit a very built man with green hair and long trench coat. Crissabella screeched and ran down the two sets of stairs to the young man, she could see the man was very upset. Crissabella slowly walked up to the man and gently tapped Fable on the shoulder blade and whispered in squeaky voice “excuse me…”
He turned around to face her, “Is this yours?” he asked holding out a sketchbook that had fallen shortly after the papers. “Because if it is your one heck of an artist.” His voice soft and bitter sweet. He handed her the book, “Be more…” He had barely gotten started when the banner she had been sitting on flew up and wrapped around them both.
Crissabella blushed as she was forced to press her hands against his chest in order to keep herself upright. As she tried to pull the banner from around the both of them. Crissabella smiled “Yes, those drawings are mine” She smiled as she was finally released from the banner.
Well, well, cute, sexy, and artistic, he thought to himself . “What are you doing for the banner maybe I can help?” He had his art hanging everywhere in the school. “How about that it looks like everyone had left you here for yourself.” His voice soft and angel sweet as he looked into her eyes.
Oh My God he is talking to me, Crissabella thought. Crissabella had seen this boy around school but never talked to him, she never thought he would talk to her, but here she stood blue jeans and white button up top, talking to Fable. Crissabella finally stuttered out “I…I would love your help.” He is so cute, sexy, mysterious, and incredibly, much more artistic than me… he is so perfect! Crissabella thought as she collected her papers, books, and colored pencils. As Crissabella finished collecting her items she stood and began walking back to the roof when she noticed he was not following. Crissabella turned to Fable, “Are you coming?” Crissabella giggled and turned back around. Crissabella began walking but remembered something and spun back and took a step back “I’m Crissabella but my friends call me Bella.”
“Alneto, but my friends call me Fable, so can you.” He noticed that she was headed to the roof . So he grabbed he around the waist, “Hold on to your books an don’t worry about a thing.” He jumped landing lightly on the edge holding her tighter around her waist. “There that faster,” His voice soft as he spoke and opened his backpack and pulling out his sketch book.
Crissabella was amazed by his ability but was not worried, he has abilities to wonder if he knows I have one to. Crissabella thought frantically, thinking of how she could paint/draw the future and walk through walls. Crissabella smiled and stepped down from the ledge and gathered her balance again. “So that was pretty impressive” Bella smiled. Bella pulled out her book and sketching “So Fable why are you so quite?”
The book in his lap flipped to the last page as he drew with such speed and grace, “I’m quite because I’m thinking.” He put down his pencil and pulled out a huge box of color pencils. He was very muscular as he tightened his arms.
Crissabella smiled as she finished her sketch and began coloring also, “So you’re always thinking, what do you think about if you don’t mind me asking?” Crissabella flipped the page her eyes went white as she began drawing again.
He took his time on the color and when he finished he held it up so only he could see it. “Well right now I’m thinking about why they voted me class king.”
Crissabella thought, your perfect why would you not, Crissabella smiled. “Did you not want to be class king?” Crissabella smiled and clenched a small stuffed rabbit.
“It’s not that, I just don’t want to go, because I can’t find a date, every girl I have asked out is afraid of me,” he hissed lightly, he had been a blood sucker ALL his life.
Bella smiles “I’m not afraid of you she looked down at her sketch book and continued to sketch the picture of Fable.
Fable looked over at her and smiled “really your not afraid of me?” He was over taken with shock, she is cute and she’s not afraid of me, she smells great. He was quite again. “Bella, do you want to go for coffee?”
Bella smiled “I would love to go for coffee but first stay right there” Bella smiled as she finished the picture of him. “what do you think?” She asked as she held up her sketchbook.
Wow, he thought “that’s great, nice detail.” He handed it back to her, helped her up, gathered his stuff and helped her get hers. He turned her to face him and grabbed her around the waist “Hold on, alright.” He jumped and landed at an angle and fell over pulling her on to him. “Sorry”, he started to laugh at what he had done. “But you’re so cute when you fall over like that. Are you ok?”
Bella smiles “Well you look cute when you’re sorry,” she got up and lent him her hand. Bella smiled and said “Now you hold on.” Bella disappeared in a swirl of blue lights.
He stood there in complete shock, “What the fuck just happened?” He looked toward his car and pulled out his keys and pushed the panic button because there was a cat asleep on the hood. The cat jumped and walked over to him and jumped into human, “Hey Fable,” a sexy little vampire stood in front of him, “How’s my little brother?” “What do you want?” Fable asked. They had never got along both had teeth bared when Fable just said, “What?”
Bella smiled as the two argued Bella giggled then cleared her throat.
Fables looked over at her and then back at his older sister. “Who is she?” His sister said. Fable grabbed Bella around the waist and whispered softly in her ear, “Play along. “She’s my girl friend.” He said to his sister.
Crissabella smiled as she began playing with the ends of his hair on his neck. She extended her hand “Hello I’m Bella, “she introduced herself. “Fable dear what are we doing tonight?” She cuddled next to him.
“I was planning on taking you to the coffee shop on north street, then taking you to Navita.” His voice was soft as he said those names. Navita is the most expensive restaurant in town and the coffee shop on north isn’t cheap either. “How does that sound sweetie?” he nipped lightly at her neck.
Bella giggled and turned to stand in front of Fable and shyly kissed him. Bella slowly stepped back. “Coming Hun?” She smiled.
Fable waved to his sister as he walked away holding Bella around the waist still being a vampire and nipping at her neck.
Bella giggled and stopped, jumping on his back and laying her head on the crease of his neck. When Bella and Fable were out of ear range of his sister she picked her head up and asked him “Do you really feel that way?”
“Feel what way?” He asked blushing. His perfect face small and simple as he looked deeply into her beautiful eyes. “What do you mean vampires have no heart?”
“Do you really want to be my boyfriend?” She asked shyly, gently sliding back a step. She looked at him and blushed a deep red. “Who says a vampire can’t have a heart? Fable I see the way you look at me and I hoped you aw the way I look at you.”
He glanced at her his eyes small and purplish. He smiled slightly holding his truck door open and flying her into the passengers seat. “How about coffee?”
Bella was in his truck with ease it didn’t even feel as if he flung her. She looked at him with soft golden yellow eyes with hints of blue. “Coffee sounds nice” she was so wrapped up in his perfect face walking to the drivers side. She forgot she had asked him a question. “Hey no changing the subject. So do you?”
Fable knocked the truck into gear, “We’ll talk later.” He drove to the north side of town and pulled into the parking lot. “Okay come here.” He grabbed her and pulled her closer to him and kissed her passionately.
Bella smiled as she ran her fingers through his hair and kissed him passionately back. She smiled and slid into his lap.
Fable pulled her into his lap and started to do many different things like running his hands all over the many places he could find warm skin. His cold skin loving the warming touches of her. He pulled her away from his lips, “Does this answer your question? Another thing: Do you want to be with some thing as dangerous as me?”
Bella kissed him, she ran her fingers through his hair as he talked, she loved sitting there knowing she was wanted. “ I seriously don’t see why we had to come all the way into town to answer me, but I love your answer.” She smirked “and who says angels can’t be dangerous.
He looked at her and said “well you have a point” then thought to himself, she is one of the most wanted girls in school sitting on my lap in my truck kissing me with passion.
Bella looked at him her soft yellow eye almost closed, she laid her head on his chest. “Lets get coffee I’m sleepy.”
He held her there in his lap, “first before we go I have to show you something.” His voice was soft, his face started to tighten as he changes, when he was done he hit the dash forcing blinds in the window to come down and close. “Please don’t be frightened I wont hurt you right no I’m not hungry.” Once he finished that her turned to face her. Every vampire detail noticeable.
Bella gasped the relaxed. She ran her finger gently over the harsh face. Bella giggled “How can you guys skin be so soft?” She laid her head back down “everyone has two sides, this does not change my feelings for you,” she whispered.
Fable with one really quick movement had her pinned to the seat of his truck. “Bella, would you like to have a boyfriend, but before you answer, listen. A boyfriend that at any moment can kill you because he’s hungry, OR your family, I’m dangerous. So dangerous that they won’t let me walk the halls at school without a trained slayer.” He with another quick movement was on the outside of the truck, “Oh by the way you taste great!? He pointed at her neck.
Bella smiled at the man of her dreams standing outside the truck waiting for her to join him on the first original date as a couple. “I’m not afraid of you, Fable. I know you would no hurt me…intentually.” She hopped out of the truck beside him.
Fable saw his sister and pulled Bella out of the truck “come on!” his voice defensive as he rushed her along.
Bella looked around and saw Fable’s sister. “Fable why do you always keep me from her. She does not scare me. She scares me no more than you” Bella took his hand as she was rushed along.
Fable took Bella to a side alley “Reason is because she is a human…” “Are you talking about me, my dear Fable you can’t protect them all, Darling he’s keeping you away from me because I’ve drained every girl friend he’s ever had.” Her voice soft almost hypnotizing. “So come on over here so I can do the same to you.”
Fable grabbed Bella not letting go. “Bella my love,” he pulled her into a hug. He then kissed her, true love, Bella was broken from his sisters bond. “Now to take care of you.” His eyes went pitch black and his face scrunched up “Mitica Kitonic” he kissed slowly. “Bella go into the coffee shop.” He said through gritted teeth. He then lunged at his sister ripping into her and spilling some of her dark blood. “Fable you can’t beat me I’m the one that bit you!” Fable froze his heart sunk he loved being vampire but at the same time hated not being able to be trusted.
She lunged knocking him into a stack like thing. He was impaled through the stomach. “Augr, you’re not going to kill me sis.” He hissed, he pushed himself off the wall kicking her into a dumpster on the far side of the alley. His middle bleeding so badly he didn’t know that he had killed his sister. He passed out after that.
Comments
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really good story
great story good plot just moved a bit fast.beginning: 3, plot: 1, ending: 3, dialog: 3, characters: 2.
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Great plot, interisting story but it moved a little fast with a little more attention to detail needed.
Whebn people are talking you need to give each person their own paragraph and not twin it into someone elses line where they are talking because it does slightly confuse, a few spelling mistakes but it looks like it will be a brilliant piece of work otherwise!
keep it up!
~HUNTER~
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The idea was great!! But there were a few spelling and grammar mistake. Plus the plot could have been developed and explained a bit more. Other than that can't wait for more!
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