Twisted Ends Chpt1

Stormy, rain falling, Lightning striking here and there. A little girl walking home from a friends house. `squish, squish` the sound came with each step. The girl giggled at the sprinkling rain. Drops falling, and landing on her face, rolling down, hitting others growing and falling faster. `drip, drip, drip` The girl shook her hair. Drops flinging everywhere. Rain soaked hair landing in her face. A car drives by `vroom~-`. Startled the girl stops and watches the car drive on. Her time playing has come to an end, as she reaches her home. Lights streaming from one of the many windows. Opening the door, light beaming out. `Squish` stepping over the threshold.1

"Hi mom"2

"One sec. let me get a towel Tituba!"3

"Thanks"4

"So how was your time at Igies?"5

"It was great we played, ate-"6

"What did you eat?"7

"A pb&j, with a glass of milk ...Oh and a cookie!"8

"Oh good i don't have to feed you `hmmhmm`", Mom said giggly9

"Oh and we danced too"10

"Who taught you how to dance?"11

"Igies mom"12

"I'll have to thank her next time we talk. You wanna teach me?"13

"Sure! OK first you have to put each thumb under your arm and waddle them up and down"14

"Like this?" 15

"Yup, then move your hands to your side and wiggle your butt. Then turn and clap four times"16

"three times?"17

"No four"18

"Oh, OK"19

"And you sing a tune to it. Dunananah, dunananah, dunananah" `clap, clap, clap, clap`20

"hahaha, this is fun,"21

"mhm" Shaking her head22

"Well lets get you dried"23

Wrapping the warm fuzzy towel around her thin frame. Water dripping on the tiles forming in the cracks. Spreading taking new territories not yet reached till now.24

"Take off your clothes so your not soaking the rest of the house. don't worry dads at work and i will be in my room. So you don't have to worry about some one looking at your tush."25

"What do you want me to do with my clothes?"26

"Just leave them I'll come pick them up in a bit"27

"taking off her shirt the moment she left, then her pants" `splush`28

Picking the towel back up holding it tight for warmth. Quickly paced to her room, and shut the door behind.29

Author notes

You may not understand till the third chapter. due to time standerds i can not stay long enough to complete the second one. i do have up to the third finished but cant post it but soon will be up.

This story will consist of sadness, hate, love and many other emotions not yet placed in the story.
Please i ask dont just give up reading ive spent many hours and hope many days and i wish it not go in vane. Many tears and laughs are place delicatly into each piece. I plan to make you cray and laugh. I Hope you like it.

(if you have any fixes you can tell me plz note it, but dont be smart with it if you)

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  • Schizophrenic angel
    February 3, 2005
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    lol, neat poem mark, i can't wait to read the other chapters.....

  • GreyMist
    February 3, 2005
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    thnxs your the first to respond to my story and i hope theres more ive spent days just for three chapters i hope it doesnt go in vein and i hope you keep reading them if you want put me as friend so you can keep reading


  • February 2, 2005
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    Vivid imagery, nice feel to this writing. B