Why did this happen ( still working on it)

As I woke up to see my lover next to me moaning in his sleep I smiled to him. I turned to see my clock it said 6:00am I sigh as I got out of bed as I got really for work I felt arms around me I turned around to be only stop by a pair of lips.1


"Good morning” He said I turned around to see Chase with a towel on I looked at him to see what his was playing at.2

"Dylan come for a shower with me” he said as he whispered in my ear I Shivered as his breath came on my skin.3

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He walks to the room but not taking his eyes off me, Temptation kick in my mind I got up to follow him in the room. As I enter the room I saw Chase sitting on the bed.5

"I though you wanted to go in the shower?” Said I as I walked closer to the bed. 6


"Well I change my mind” he said as he grabbed my tie pulling me closer to him. He playfully licks my earlobe.7

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I looked at him if I wanted more I pushed him down to the bed he moaned as I slowly put my hands down to his stomach.9

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"Remember I only wearing a towel” he whispers in my ear .11

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"Oh yeah" I said as I moved slowly down to his manhood Chase moaning. The door knocked.  I stop to look up, 13

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"Dylan it's your mother” said the voice from outside the door.  I sighed as I got of Chase he looked at me with his puppy eyes. 15

 

"Stop it, I am all really felt bad about stopping” I said as walked out of the room.16

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 As I open the door to find my mother wearing rags or something she got out of her room. I think she needs a makeover with her fashion. 18

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"Hi ya' mum, what brings you here on this fine morning” said as she walked in the room to find Chase standing there naked.20

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I quickly covet my mum’s eyes and pointed to Chase to the bed room he nodded and quickly run in our room. Mum tyred to put my hands away form her eyes.22

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"Oh mum I go you a um...a gift” I said a I dragged my mother in a another room,24

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I took my hands off her eyes and quickly told her to stay here then I ran in the room when Chase was still naked,I walk up to him and got his pants and quick lock him in the bathroom.26

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"Hey Dylan what the hell"said Chase trying to get the door open.28

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"Oi Chase my mother don't know who you are and she does not know i am gay now put your clothes on or i force you to put it on"I said i i heard a sign of Chase.30

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"Fine but you got to tell your mother about me one day"I open the door to see Chase walk pass me in the room when my mother was there.32

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"Mother this is Chase my study buddy"I said as Chase he toke her hand.34

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“Hello Dylan’s mother it nice to meet you” he said as he kissed her hand.36

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“Oh why thank you young man” she said I look at Chase he looks so happy to met my mum by what would mum think about me going out with a man.38

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“Oh Chase, is my son being good to you?” asked mum, then Chase looked at me and smiled.40

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“Yeah he looks after me a lot and sometimes he punish me” I looked at his if I was going to choke him.42

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“Ummm…. Chase” I said “Yes” he replied with a smile as well “I think you have to go I think I heard your taxi pull up” I said pushing him in the door.44

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“Goodbye” I said “Goodbye buddy” he quickie slip a kiss when he said that my face was red as I slammed the door in his face . 46

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As hours went bye I said bye to mother and closed the door of the taxi and waved goodbye to her I turned around and walk into a person “Sorry about that”.49

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 I looked up to see a tall man about my height him looked at me “It ok , I get that all the time” he laugh he had blonde hair with red eyes ,slim body taller then me his smile was warm and happy, I laugh as well with him.51

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“I was looking for a man called Chase Michaels, do you know him?” he said to me I nod my head.53

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“Yes I do he left about 5 hours ago” I said looking at the clock.55

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“By the way how do you know him?” I said57

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“I am sorry but have to go” he said running on the road and called a taxi.59

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“Damn it” I said I went in the house who was that man I asked myself, I garbed the phone .61

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It ring and ring “Hello” it answered “Hey it me” I said in the phone “Can we met somewhere I need to talk to you Chase” I said to him “Dylan it not the right time now” he said 63

Author notes

There are two males that are in love right? Well, make one of those men cheet on the other with another guy. Remeber though, no detailed sex. It's yaoi every where folks. You can make the ending how ever. You can make the man who was cheeted, still be together, or you can even make him not even know that his lover is cheeting on him. Or, yo can just kill them off. Hehe. You pick the ending, just make one of the men cheet on the other with another man. Good luck.

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  • YaoiGalKilla
    November 19
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    well

    As you know my comments are normally ok, lol, ummm, you're grammar and some of the spelling was horrible, though the story line was wicked XD, thanks for being in the compitition.

    Ps, one of the spelling mistakes
    garbed the phone .61


  • KalineReine
    November 16
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    Wow that was really good. ^_^ I liked the way he was trying it from his Mom the whole time and she was clueless! Lol. I wish our society was more accepting, but sometimes I think they never will be. Great job writing this, though!


  • Paws
    October 17

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    lol lol you spell cheat wrong XD and remember you owe me. Gonna enter your dumb contest for pointies


  • Sgs gold member
    October 4

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    Nice job, I love how you use a lot of dialogue to tell your story effectively. Good job on this! Keep on writing.


  • Kagamine Rin
    September 12

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    Well, this is a very cute beginning for a story, and I like it. However, I noticed quite the few grammar and spelling mistakes. You should work on that!

    To continue this, all you need is a bit inspiration. All my creations suck, so, I shall give you some pointers! :3

    Good job


  • Wildpaw-Lily
    September 5
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    0.0 omb! (oh my buddha) u scared me with this story! o.0 :3


  • Yoko
    August 8

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    Wow. That was wonderful. Hm, I wonder who that other boy is. Loooooved the details. Still kinda red. Lol. I know it's not finished, but it was still greeeeaaat! Good job, sw sissy. ^^

  • this is good you could win this contest...MAYBE

  • I love this write more you are a very talanted with yaoi


  • heyevry1
    July 9
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    for the story i meen


  • heyevry1
    July 9
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    heay


  • heyevry1
    July 9
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    *smile*


  • heyevry1
    July 9
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    great

    *clap*


  • Intrepid
    July 2

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    In a way I was a little disappointed while i am a sucker for male/male and while my last name is chase and I felt pretty cool about that - I wanted an ending, I wanted more detail and it seemed a slight bit irritating that you expected us to work it out in our minds.

    None the less what I read was fairly well written x.x

    good luck
    well done so far
    thanks for entering

    Blair

    • thax for the comment i am trying to think what to write next in this story but i will end it for the contest

  • I LUV DIZ POEM,ITS VERY KEWL BUT HAS SUM SPELLING MISTAKES BUT STLL AWSUM KEEP UP DA GOOD WORK!!!!

  • write more plz


  • pixxy
    June 23
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    ok i don't know to say.


  • RegalAngel
    June 22
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    ... were is the rest of it? it good though!

  • mmm i wonder what to do now?


  • heyevry1
    June 21

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    and y

    and y does love hurt, well dont learn from my mistakes i am so sad of wat just happened to me and alex i miss her so much


  • heyevry1
    June 21
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    different

    it was a bit different ib that fact very well done


  • Yoko
    June 17
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    Lol. Hi, Yaoi. Yes, I know what you want. Hmmmmm, let me see. Ahh. I got one.

    There are two males that are in love right? Well, make one of those men cheet on the other with another guy. Remeber though, no detailed sex. It's yaoi every where folks. You can make the ending how ever. You can make the man who was cheeted, still be together, or you can even make him not even know that his lover is cheeting on him. Or, yo can just kill them off. Hehe. You pick the ending, just make one of the men cheet on the other with another man. Good luck.

    • tell me what ya think of it now hehehehehehe


      • Yoko
        June 23
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        I knoooooow what he's planing. You sly, little thing. I'll tell you what I think about it. Dun dun dun duuuuuuh! Blush heaven! Hmmmmmm, can't wait for the rest. Good job, so far. Lol, mew!

    • How evil r u


      • Yoko
        June 17
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        I can get real evil. My family calls me Satan's child, and sometimes, Satan's wife. Mwhahahahaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!

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