The rain fell, colliding epically with the girls pale hand. She stood there in nothing but a white sun dress, and an equally white hat. 1
"Rain, Rain, go away, come again another day," She whispered through the almost white lips.2
The rain beat down, causing her hat to bend lightly and the grass around her to bow to it's power. She looked up, letting the breeze tickle her cheeks and play with her hair. 3
"I will not bow to you," she said, the hand which once embraced the rain then crushed it. 4
The wind blew fiercely, carrying away her hat. The rain dropped like heavy rocks, smashing tree branches, and whipping her arm with red lashes.5
"I will not bow to you!" She screamed to the sky.6
The wind came with unnatural power, the sky turned black, dropping hail and rain with equal fierceness and striking near by tree's with blinding bolts of lightning. 7
"Rain, Rain go away, come again another day," She sang as the wind whistled between the tree's and thunder shook the very ground. 8
The hail slammed her body, exploding into small fragments which imbedded themselves into her skin. She winced in pain holding her arms beginning to fall.9
"I will not bow to you!" She hollered to heavens, regaining some strength and rising to fight the rain. 10
The thunder roared, the sky sounding as if it was splitting. The rain exploded filling the air making her choke. She stumbled, the wind ripping tree’s from the earth the hail filling the holes. The clouds twisted, reaching down to her. 11
”Go away! I will never bow to you!” She cried, tears streeming down her face to join the now ankle deep pond the feild had become. 12
The thunder ripped through her, forcing her back. It boomed with such power the clouds shook. The rain rained, the lightning struck and the wind blew. The skies cried, the clouds riped apart, slowly ebbing back from which they came. They cried once more only not thunder, but a muffeled message, a muffeled cry... “How dare you”.
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Comments
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I love this story. It has so much emotion. I can almost see this girl standing out in the rain yelling at the sky.




