Super-Man~~Chapter 1~~The Begining of A Long Day

"*BEEP BEEP BEEP BEEP*..."1

"Murrrrrrphmmmm," I HATE my alarm clock. I mean absolutely despise it.2

After being so rudely stolen away from my baby's arms, I lie in bed staring at the ceiling, wishing that it hadn't been a dream. \Maybe I should turn my alarm off\. So with a groan I am officially awake.3

I recoil as my feet hit the cold floor. Our floors are always cold. It could be the middle of summer when the temperatures reach nearly a hundred degrees, and crawling out of bed will make you feel like you're walking barefoot around the Arctic circle.4

Seeing the current February atmosphere in our little town in the mid-west is about thirty degrees out, naturally I would go to bed wearing nothing but a sports bra and A Barrel Full of Monkeys sleep pants, so as soon as I roll the covers off, I consider calling my mom and telling her I'm still sick.5

I look over at the florescent green glow of my alarm clock as I turn the annoying fucker off I see the time. 7:48. \Oh great\. Okay, you see my alarm is set three minutes fast so I have fifteen minutes to get dressed and get to the school that's two blocks away. "*Damn it!* I could have slept for ten more minutes! Whatever. I'm up, I might as well move."6

As I dress, which is comical enough without this happening, one of my favorite songs comes on the radio, and seeing as how I'm the only one home other then Lucky, my dog, I crank my stereo and start dancing around while pulling my pants on, nearly killing myself.7

After the songs over and I've got myself ready I still have then minutes left so I'll just leave early. I have art classes all morning anyways, so whats ten more minutes?8

I arrive safely to my class but on my way there I almost run into who me and my friends have began to call Creepy Stalker Kid. So I just head on my way, and in the process of trying not to run into him, I walk straight into It.9

It. How I hate It. It doesn't even notice that I hate It, but It should because I have said how much I hate It to It's face, but enough about that.10

\Well I can tell that this is going to be a long day\.11

~ ~To Be Continued~ ~12

Author notes

Okay...So this is chapter 1...I promise you there will be horror...I just have to set it up...Hope you like it... ~Hey Kid Want A Nut

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  • I Hope You Choke
    September 8, 2005
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    haha yeah like i wish i were home a lone in the mornings besides the fact that my bro is my ride to hell soooo yeah... okay does this 'creepy stalker kid' have a name? oorrr.... ...i suppose i should just read on!


  • Crowheart
    August 16, 2005
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    yayyy!!! more creepy stalker kid...
    just a note, when I was growing up in a small midwest town, I too lived about two blocks from school. My alarm clock was first bell...


  • Amicus2K9
    May 18, 2005
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    Your writing has a nice flow to it, very casual and the details, (alarm clock) while not really playing a part in the story, give the reader a look through your eyes. Look forward to reading more...although I am not into 'horror' writes, this seems to have a 'humorous' intent, and even a little 'slapstick' it "IT" whatever it...turns out to be...

    regards, amicus...

  • dori-ma
    May 9, 2005
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    interesting so far .. very funny and real.

  • eastbrook
    May 9, 2005
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    what is with superman in this story.....this is a woman you are talking about right...or at least a girl...... where does he come in....but i mean that will come right.....you can deffinetly tell that this is a teenage girl that we are talking about..... nice write...feature more please!

  • RJM007
    May 9, 2005
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    sweetness

    this is cool. i especially like the back ground. im a big fan of super man. i was wondering if you could read some of my poems and tell me what you think? if not thats cool. Thanks


  • B Chandler Greeters member
    May 9, 2005
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    yes it was indeed funny

    this looks like its gonna be worth the wait in reading and im sure the whole story will be a big hit with everyoone or anyone reading it ill be looking forward to reading the upcoming chapters

  • M.J.
    May 9, 2005
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    Great job Nutty it's a great piece that you have here
    I can't wait until the second part of this Nutty keep on writing
    and inspiring too sir or ma'am.

  • ISpeakForTheTrees
    March 29, 2005
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    interesting. I'd be willing to read more!


  • Sunlit Memorabilia
    March 29, 2005
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    This is just awesome, seriously. I mean its so normal...I mean its like a rutine...but way more intresting. The good thing about this you can identify with the caracter...So yay for you! You should defenetly write a lot more!
    -Skyelle


  • abc123uandme
    February 23, 2005
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    hey this is a great story, I cant wait to see more!!!!!! keep it up.

  • LxSER
    February 7, 2005
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    IT!! another intersting write. IT!!! sorry it was one of those things that you have to keep going. expescialy at the beginning. later.
    LxSER


  • Nicole jones
    February 2, 2005
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    IT maybe does like u too though.......sorry....had to be said!! LOL! anyways good job! Cant wait to hear more!


  • Frozen Roses
    February 2, 2005
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    It, it would not happen to be the door divider in the hall would it? I just know that you and Kya have ran into that many times before. *Imagens sister and friend running into divider*
    Anyway, cool write!

    ~Achika~

  • Ilati Aza
    February 2, 2005
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    It? You have an "it" too! lol. You've set this all up so well, I can't wait to read the rest!!!!!!

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