i woke up. i could feel tubes sticking into my nose and down my throat. where was i? i opened my eyes trying to get to grips with my surroundings. 1
i see a blurred shape sitting on the end of my bed. i recognised it...but i couldn't remember...i was too doped up with drugs...2
'who...who are you again...?' i say weakly, trying my hardest to remember...i knew it was someone i knew...if only i could remember...3
the person gasped, and stumbled from the room...i opened my eyes wider, trying to see where they went. everything started spinning...i passed out again. 4
i opened my eyes again, to see a nurse standing over me. the tube from my nose had gone, and i could see properly. i looked at my arm, and saw that the glass had gone too, but 15 stitches where in its place.5
'had a nice sleep did we?' the nurse asked nicely. i was struggling to remember what happened.6
*needles*....*collapsing*....*Jenn*....JENN! i sat up and looked around wildly.7
'wheres Jenn?' i asked the nurse8
'sit down now, it will all be ok, she said pushing me back onto the bed gently but firmly9
'wheres Jenn?!?' i asked my urgently. 10
'i don't know' said the nurse, still smiling. she looked like she had the smile moulded onto her face. 'would you like me to find out for you?'11
'yes' i said, relaxing onto the bed, starting to feel drowsy again. i shook my head, waking myself up.12
the nurse left the room. i slipped off the bed. i looked down at my mid-drift. i was wearing one of those typically green hospital robes. i bent down and searched quickly in the side cupboard by my bed, and found my clothes. i quickly dressed in them, ignoring my blood stained sleeve, and left the room. 13
i followed the signs to the main desk, and walked up to it. 14
'can you tell me which ward Jenn Woodward is in? i asked politely to the lady who was filing her nails. 15
'we don't have a Jenn Woodward. i think she may have been dismissed' where the words which came out of those fake, red lipstick lips. but my mind was already in over drive16
she wouldn't have left the hospital without me: she would have waited! where was she...?17
i stumbled from the hospital, thinking. her parents must have taken her home...yeah, that's it...18
i walked to the near by bus stop, shivering a little bit. the bus came 2 minutes later. i dug out the spare change i always kept in my pocket. i sat on the bus, my head against the window. when the bus came to my stop, i nearly fell over.19
i got off the bus, and walked past the park, to Jenn's house, stumbling occasionally. why did i feel so tired? must have been the drugs...20
i half walked, half dragged myself up her driveway, and opened her front door. i was so well known here, her family didn't mind letting myself in to see Jenn, i was like a second daughter. 21
i walked up the stairs, hearing sobs from Jenn's room. 'it must be Jenn' i told myself, walking slightly faster along the landing. as i opened her bedroom door, Jenn came out. she came right through me! she ran through me...22
i gasped, and stumbled into her bedroom. i saw Jenn. Jenn, blue in the face...with a noose around her neck. Jenn, staring at me with lifeless, glassy eyes. Jenn...dead...her mother, crying at her lifeless feet, sobbing her heart out....23
'JENN!!!' i cried out, tears already pouring down my face. she was dead....she was dead...then i fainted on the floor.24
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haha! the next in the series!!!
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i h8 mina,
why don't you just back the fuck off, her stories are brilliant. you can't put her writing down just because you don't like her,that's worse than what you've been doing to her all along. just keep this in mind, what goes around comes around.
Always
Arachne.
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Excellent!
WoW! WoW! WoW! This was soooo good. I loved it. I'm just a bit confused? jenn's dead? but how? Hope there is a nex chapter. also i think you should do the capitals and stuff becuase the kind of takes away from the piece. Apart from that good. -
My god this was soooooooooooooooooooooooo good i loooooooooooooovvvvvvvvvveeeeeeeedddddddd it lol but honestly this was fantastic but she died :-( oh welll i'ts amazin
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noo not jenn...neil an matt fuck u! shes an awesome riter i love these stories..
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this is a great rite............plz dont tell me that this happened
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absolutely shit!
that poem was sooooooo good i didnt even read it!
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uhm shes been having problems with him so she knows who he is, If i can't write then how did i fucking apologise? u stiupid gothic negro.
Ur gna go to hell with the rest of u wrist slitters.
I dont write fucking poetry btw, u think im as gay as u losers?
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if thats so true, than YOU put writing out for us to read!
oh thats right! you cant write!
keep ur insaults to yourself!plz -
sry that was a boy called tom berry, sufc_berry26 u might no him, he used my account.
I apologise I hope u r well. -
I think matt n neil r right u stupid gothic bitch, so go to hell love scott x
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... Dude.. 
That is so sad.. I love it.
i couldn't say my fave part cause the whole things awesome.. Love it heaps.
Take care hun
Love C
xxx
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wow
wow.... that gave me chills....
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asolutely shocking performance from the gothi
if i wanted 2 read a story, den i wood go 2 a bookshop and buy 1. 2 b cumpletely honest wid ya, ur poetry sicks and ur storys suck even more, dnt even try next time. from neil & matt -
NOOOOOOOOOO! Why did she kill herself! I loved the thing about where she opened the door and Jenn ran right through her, that was great, but NOOO!!! Gutted for you Kiss, its going to be a task
I loved it, so so much but, why did she kill herself!!!
Im not impressed dudette
Love Ya~
Carla
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this makes me angry, but filled with intense sadness and despair all at the same time....
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hahaha i like it...i like the way i run through you....damn now i have to write why she killed herself...dammit! should be fun though - two more yeh? nice write baby love ya loads xxxxxxxxx
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sad but good
sad baby but still really good. -
she killed herself!!! no way! why would she do that...ah geez i hate cliffhangers right more fast!!!
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Ahhhhh why did she do it... exciting and dramatic, loved it!
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Loved it. Exctiting til the end. Ur gr8.
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