Our story starts in the little hick town of Westville, Oklahoma. Now Westville was a rather boring place to live expessally if one was 17, and hated sports! Four friends Becca, Donnia, David, and Alex had found away to banish the small town blues. Every Saturday night they would head to Pig Holler and make trouble for the locals. On one such Saturday they were bothering the local nudest when they heard a crash in the trees behind them. All four ran toward the sound in wonder. There almost buried in the red mud was a U.F.O of some sort. The four friends watched in awe and horror as out popped three little pink blobs.1
"Oh, How cute is that?!" exclaimed Becca in wonder.2
" Cute is no the word I'd use!" said Donnia " They look all slimy and icky!"3
" Well I think there cool!" David said as if that settled the matter.4
The four friends didn't know what to do, so they backed away slowly and went home. They didn't want to tell anyone in case the Feds decided to use annul probes on them or something similar. The next day at school they had a meeting at lunch. After some discussion they decided to go back to the crash site. The only one who didn't want to go was Alex, but after they called him a chicken he agreed reluctantly. 5
When they got to the crash site the ship was still there, but the creatures were all gone.6
" That's strange were did they all go?" asked Alex.7
" Lets split up and look around." said David, he seems to be rather bossy all the time, " Alex you and Donnia look west. Becca and I will look east. We'll meet back here in thirty minutes."8
" Which ways east?" Alex asked, he's not the sharpest knife in the bunch.9
Donnia just shook her head and grabbed his arm dragging him toward the road. Alex was fallowing Donnia when all of a sudden they heard a scream. They looked at each other for a minute then went running toward the sound.10
" That has to be Becca" Donnia said starting to get scared.11
When they got to the enclosure they found David dead on the ground.12
" Oh No! What are we going to do?! Were is Becca?!" Donnia asked bawling into her hands.13
" Hey look over here! I think I found her." Alex said pointing. Down the side of a cliff was Becca hang on to a tree limb. " Hey I'll reach down there and get her, you can help me pull her up."14
" Ok" Donnia said.15
Alex reached down and grabbed a hold of Becca's arm. Behind him Donnia started screaming bloody murder. When he looked up he saw Donnia fall off the face of the cliff, and splat on the ground bellow.16
Becca was screaming incoherent words now. Alex some how managed to pull her up and they started running to the house of the nudist. When they got there the found the house on fire, and the nudist laying dead in his yard.17
6 Months Later:18
" Becca do you want to go get some fresh air? I think there is someone here to see you." said a nurse in a gentle and patient voice. Becca didn't say anything, but nodded her head. 19
Alex stood there waiting for her flowers in hand.20
" How are you?" He asked looking sad. He knew that Becca would never probably speak again. Life had gotten back to a semblance of normal, but he knew they would never forget the encounter at Pig Holler.21
Author notes
This has some of my friend's names in it. I think it will crack them up when they read it.
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Comments
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Pretty good.
But it needs some editing.
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Cool story. I agree with SilhouEtte, it was a tad morbid. The ending was cool, fit perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
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Geez, that was funny! Very out-there and a tad morbid, but funny nonetheless! I love the aliens, and the ending with Becca in the mental hospital...Awesome story, thanks for entering, and Good Luck!

