Letters to world #11
I don’t understand why I’m writing this, I don’t understand how I’ll end it but I do understand that something will come out of this.
I hope you don’t reject this, I hope you don’t think because in these letters thinking isn’t allowed. In these letters shouting is forbidden and wanting is prohibited.2
I want to start this with a meaning, not about a rant or a letter to a friend.
However something that will stick in your mind. I am now wondering if this will be any success or if this will end in tragedy. I don’t want to worry about my spelling mistakes and I don’t want to know about your opinions… just read, it’s worth it.3
I don’t want to tell you my day as you might start to wonder about yours.
You don’t need to understand me or acknowledge me just know I exist, I’m not writing a letter because I want to but because I need to.
I want to know how the world ended up like this, how unsolved murders are advertised with money. How The Simpson is called racist and the Family Guy ‘Unoriginal’
How global warming is increasing while you’re reading this and how Rihanna’s single ‘Umbrella’ flooded England.4
I wonder if you’re still reading this and if this makes sense to you.
I don’t want to bore you and I don’t want to entertain you… so I’ll leave nicely however do remember that if Lindsay Lohan can dye her hair blonde you can change the world.5
-Your Unwanted Pen Pal 6
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Letters to world #1
What do you think?
-Missi
A contest entry
- Originality is a good thing ^^ by Adelaide Blood.
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What Do You Think?
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lol. This was really good. I loved this. It was amazing. You have a really good letter thing on your hands. Great job!
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Cynical
FUNNY LOL
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It's a nice segue into a larger body of work. I do have a critism in the form of a question. In the last line of the first paragraph you closed with "wanting is prohibited" and then proceeded to use the term want repeatedly. Why? I might have used another term so as not to sound redundant. In spite of it I enjoyed the read. Happy trails
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your writing is fabulous! u dont want to be judged, that makes it even more judgable...
simple yet meaningful.
lovely
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Thanks for thinking that it was meaningful
Thank you for readin'
-Missi
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Wow - well done!
I like this. Very well written and deep, 
Well, some minor grammar stuff, nothing major, I'll put them on if you want...but other than that - great write.
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Thank you for your comment, I'm really glad you enjoyed it
-Missi
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hey!!!!!
following all that u said.......... i wont judge or think or anything. i know how our hearts long sometimes so much to just be........ not being judged just taken as we r.
if u r thinking of continuing this i will definitely read more.
from some of ur last posts i get a feeling that u r going through a rough patch.if u want to talk i wud listen without jugement.if u want!!!!!
but if this is just ur writing n u r not down.i wud congratulate u for writing so beautifully...i hope that it is later n that u r not sad n just brilliant at bring forth emotions.
i am grateful that i came across u in my life
u certainly dont qualify as unwanted pen pal for me as i surely want to talk to u.
take care
. Rewarded 8
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