Luke and Sara was friends for like, years. Luke knew for a fact that he was in love, but he was afraid for Sara's reaction. He shuddered just thinking about it. Sara was never the girl for men. The only man that actually got to talk to her was Luke. He didn't mind that everyone made fun of him for being friends with Sara. He decided to tell her his love the first moment he saw her.1
He tugged his locker opened. Stuffing his stuff in, he heard some muttering. His attention turned to the hallway. Sara walked through the clearing with her head high. Everyone started muttering mean things about her and laughing. Luke shot a evil glare at everyone of them. The hallway went quiet real easy. 2
Sara pulled her locker open. Her locker was right next to Luke's. Her sweet aroma flooded his nostrils. His heart throbbed in his chest. He started to heavenly blush. Hands quaked as she took a peak at him, than she threw a quick wink. She laughed at how bad he blushed. Luke stuttered some random words, but Sara walked off.3
Luke sighed. How am I going to tell her I love her. He whimpered for a bit, than a shot of genius ran through his mind. He let out an evil smile. His evil laugh made everyone clear the halls.4
Sara was in her language arts class. She scribbled notes on her blank sheet of paper. The notes were for a story she was supposed to be working on. Silence filled the air, till a girl with glasses pointed, "Look outside." Sara pushed to the window and there she saw. In the lawn, of the school, were some bolds spots where it been mowed. It said,
"I love you, Sara."5
Sara knew who did it. She dashed out of the room, and found Luke in the cafeteria. She leaped in his arms, as tears of joy trickled down her cheeks. She whispered, "I love you, two." Luke smiled and pulled her head up to a tender kiss. They didn't care who was watching, they knew one thing. They were in love.6
The next period Luke was at the principle. Luke stated as he entered the gloomy room, "Before you punish me, remember this. I did it all for love. So, what ever you do, you are punishing a man who felt love. It's not my fault that I have these feelings. So you are punishing a man that felt something that happens to everyone. Can you help feeling love? No, you can't! So, remember that." The principle let out a little grin.7
Luke was outside mowing the rest of the lawn, muttering, "Stupid *bunny*! He has no soul. I hate him! He's a jerk!!" He got half of the lawn mowed.8
The PE teacher commented, "Remember, you did this all for love." He placed his hand over his heart as he mocked Luke.9
Luke gagged, "Ah, shut up." He grumbled as he rushed to get his job done. 10
Sara was walking home, when a couple of teenagers from her school, came up to her. They were three years older though. Sara was thirteen, and Luke was fourteen. Those other teens were sixteen. She tried to walk passed them, but the one, who looked like the leader, grabbed her shoulder,"Hey babe. We were going to my apartment and we thought if you would want to come."11
Sara brushed his hand away and answered, "No." She was tugged in the back of her hair, than thrown with great force. She crashed on the cement, cutting through her arm. She pulled herself up and spat, "Leave me alone, or do you want to get hurt?" Her threats didn't go through their heads. One teen snuck up and took hold of her arms. She tried to scream, but the other one cupped her mouth. They both dragged her off into his apartment.12
Luke wiped the sweet that gathered on his forehead. He searched high and low for Sara, but found nothing. Maybe she went home. He followed the path to Sara's house when a spot of blood caught his eyes. He bent down and examined the blood spot. He felt all tingly. He saw a drag trail, heading down an apartment. He didn't know what was happening, he just had to find out. He followed that trail. Before he knocked voices pierced from inside.13
He heard the voice of Sara. Her voice was harsh, "Don't touch me!" Than Luke heared a moan from her lips. Someone was hurting her.14
Than a dark voice came after, "See, if you obeyed you wouldn't of been hurt. Now be a good little girl." Luke's blood started to boil. He grew in raged as he busted the door down.15
He demanded, "Leave Sara alone. If you touch her I will kill you." Sara was being held by the hair. Her shirt was torn just slightly. Her eyes grew wide, as her eyes shed tears.16
The man, who looked like the leader, smirked, "Who are you?" He quickly glanced at the guy who held her hair, than shot a evil stare at Luke.17
Luke pulled his back straight, "I'm Sara's hero. Luke!" He kept a sheepish grin on his lips.18
Sara cried, "Luke, go away before they hurt you!" The leader rounded his fist and took a swing. But Luke swiftly ducked, and brought his knee up and connected it with his stomach. He fell to the ground clutching his gut, as Luke smiled triumphantly. But that didn't last long. The other guy pulled a gun out, and shot it before Luke could respond. The bullet shot through his chest.19
Luke fell on the ground. He gagged as the blood clogged his air. Sara cried his name. The leader got up and took a iron pipe in his hands. He smiled at Luke. He held his pipe up, "Some hero you are. I'm going to rape Sara and you can't do anything about it. May god have mercy on your soul." The man brought the pipe down, and crushed Luke's head. The last thing he heard was Sara's cry as everything went black. Forever.
He tugged his locker opened. Stuffing his stuff in, he heard some muttering. His attention turned to the hallway. Sara walked through the clearing with her head high. Everyone started muttering mean things about her and laughing. Luke shot a evil glare at everyone of them. The hallway went quiet real easy. 2
Sara pulled her locker open. Her locker was right next to Luke's. Her sweet aroma flooded his nostrils. His heart throbbed in his chest. He started to heavenly blush. Hands quaked as she took a peak at him, than she threw a quick wink. She laughed at how bad he blushed. Luke stuttered some random words, but Sara walked off.3
Luke sighed. How am I going to tell her I love her. He whimpered for a bit, than a shot of genius ran through his mind. He let out an evil smile. His evil laugh made everyone clear the halls.4
Sara was in her language arts class. She scribbled notes on her blank sheet of paper. The notes were for a story she was supposed to be working on. Silence filled the air, till a girl with glasses pointed, "Look outside." Sara pushed to the window and there she saw. In the lawn, of the school, were some bolds spots where it been mowed. It said,
"I love you, Sara."5
Sara knew who did it. She dashed out of the room, and found Luke in the cafeteria. She leaped in his arms, as tears of joy trickled down her cheeks. She whispered, "I love you, two." Luke smiled and pulled her head up to a tender kiss. They didn't care who was watching, they knew one thing. They were in love.6
The next period Luke was at the principle. Luke stated as he entered the gloomy room, "Before you punish me, remember this. I did it all for love. So, what ever you do, you are punishing a man who felt love. It's not my fault that I have these feelings. So you are punishing a man that felt something that happens to everyone. Can you help feeling love? No, you can't! So, remember that." The principle let out a little grin.7
Luke was outside mowing the rest of the lawn, muttering, "Stupid *bunny*! He has no soul. I hate him! He's a jerk!!" He got half of the lawn mowed.8
The PE teacher commented, "Remember, you did this all for love." He placed his hand over his heart as he mocked Luke.9
Luke gagged, "Ah, shut up." He grumbled as he rushed to get his job done. 10
Sara was walking home, when a couple of teenagers from her school, came up to her. They were three years older though. Sara was thirteen, and Luke was fourteen. Those other teens were sixteen. She tried to walk passed them, but the one, who looked like the leader, grabbed her shoulder,"Hey babe. We were going to my apartment and we thought if you would want to come."11
Sara brushed his hand away and answered, "No." She was tugged in the back of her hair, than thrown with great force. She crashed on the cement, cutting through her arm. She pulled herself up and spat, "Leave me alone, or do you want to get hurt?" Her threats didn't go through their heads. One teen snuck up and took hold of her arms. She tried to scream, but the other one cupped her mouth. They both dragged her off into his apartment.12
Luke wiped the sweet that gathered on his forehead. He searched high and low for Sara, but found nothing. Maybe she went home. He followed the path to Sara's house when a spot of blood caught his eyes. He bent down and examined the blood spot. He felt all tingly. He saw a drag trail, heading down an apartment. He didn't know what was happening, he just had to find out. He followed that trail. Before he knocked voices pierced from inside.13
He heard the voice of Sara. Her voice was harsh, "Don't touch me!" Than Luke heared a moan from her lips. Someone was hurting her.14
Than a dark voice came after, "See, if you obeyed you wouldn't of been hurt. Now be a good little girl." Luke's blood started to boil. He grew in raged as he busted the door down.15
He demanded, "Leave Sara alone. If you touch her I will kill you." Sara was being held by the hair. Her shirt was torn just slightly. Her eyes grew wide, as her eyes shed tears.16
The man, who looked like the leader, smirked, "Who are you?" He quickly glanced at the guy who held her hair, than shot a evil stare at Luke.17
Luke pulled his back straight, "I'm Sara's hero. Luke!" He kept a sheepish grin on his lips.18
Sara cried, "Luke, go away before they hurt you!" The leader rounded his fist and took a swing. But Luke swiftly ducked, and brought his knee up and connected it with his stomach. He fell to the ground clutching his gut, as Luke smiled triumphantly. But that didn't last long. The other guy pulled a gun out, and shot it before Luke could respond. The bullet shot through his chest.19
Luke fell on the ground. He gagged as the blood clogged his air. Sara cried his name. The leader got up and took a iron pipe in his hands. He smiled at Luke. He held his pipe up, "Some hero you are. I'm going to rape Sara and you can't do anything about it. May god have mercy on your soul." The man brought the pipe down, and crushed Luke's head. The last thing he heard was Sara's cry as everything went black. Forever.
Author notes
Contest Hero, by whatami: Song title Hero by Enrique Iglesias. Man, I had a lot of trouble writing this. Loved the song hero, but I don't think this story came even a little close, to give the song Hero justice. Darn. Anyway, I hope you likey. Enjoy, and please tell me what you think. If I did anything wrong, please give me your advice. Or just comment. Hope you like it. Is it sad enough?
A contest entry
- hero. by whatami.
300 points, ended June 30, 2008, 14 entries
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Comments
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awww that is sweet of him with the i love you in the grass hehehe but he had to mow the rest but it was for love
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Lol. Yup. All for love. Lol. Glad you thought he was sweet. Lol. Thanks for the comment.
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Haha.
"All for love."
That part was pretty funny. The story seemed hurried; not much explaining, or details. But I liked that you left some parts out, for the reader to imagine. The ending was totally different from the video, and that made almost all the... difference. Yeah. Pretty funny. Might not have a chance to win top three, but this was one of my favorites, so far. Thanks, good luck.



