Sunglasses

She was the one who finally broke the moment.
'I don’t know. I just don’t know'
They had been staring at their hands for hours now. Fingers laced and folded on the ground between them. They barely looked at each other. 1

***The night before***2

'Come with me!" he screamed at her. With love and lust in his dark blue eyes.
'What are you crazy! It's the middle of the night!"
That's what makes this so perfect, come on we have to leave now'
'Don’t rush me, I cant think when you rush me. Do you have any idea what could happen! People are gonna kinda wonder where we went to.'
'Please its our chance'
'I just don’t know'
'Fine, I see how it is'3

He turned and walked out the door. It was two in the morning and Sylvie was left alone sitting on her dorm room floor. She clutched her belly feeling as though she would puke again. The stupid baby really was doing her in. and now she was left alone. Ralph was gone, who knew where. 4


***3 months earlier***5

'I love you'
'I love you too' 6

Their fingers laced and landed next to them7


***3:10 AM***8

'Sy!' Sy! Where are you?'
'Ralph! Oh my gosh Ralph! I thought that you had gone forever! I thought that I would never see you again"
He stood in the doorway and she runs into his arms. She locks him in an embrace but he doesn’t return it.
'What’s wrong Ralph?"
'What is it gonna take to get you to come with me. I don’t care what it takes I will do it. No matter what, I know now that I need you with me. You know how you thought that I left, well I did. I left, hit the highway, was planning never to come back. Then guess what hit me. I missed you. Now what is it gonna take to get you to come with me?"
She said nothing. Just fell to the ground. He sat down in front of her. They locked fingers, but never made eye contact. 9

'I don’t know'
'I don’t care what e know or don’t know. Hell! I don’t know anything! I don’t care about anything! All I do know and all I do care about is getting out of here and you sitting next to me"
‘‘Ok"
'What!?"
'I said ok. We better leave before I change my mind'
And with that, they ran out of the room. They didn’t shut the door even though they knew that leaving now closed any doors here that they had worked so hard to open.10

***2 hours later***
'So. What made you change your mind?"
'You. Plus, I thought what the hell! There is nothing really for me here. If you leave, my world leaves too. Im already pregnant. My 'rents cut me off, and I have no future except with you. You were my past and are my future. Face it! You’re stuck with me babe!'
'No other'
'No other'11

And with that, she put her sunglasses on as they started to drive away. Away from there planned futures, their lives. But what they were leaving behind was nothing compared to what they were gaining. Each other. 12

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op. 8
please be nice. this is one of my few attempts at stories. you know i can only write in verse form so, tell me if it sucks

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  • the shorty
    June 13, 2008
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    Awww... Lexi stepped out of the poetry corner to write me a story! I'm extremely flattered, just so you know.
    And this is pretty good. I like the way you jump around, but how you do so in an understandable manner. I also liked the way you developed what seemed to be a fairly superficial subject into something really heartfelt. Nice job.
    Thanks for entering. *heart*