"Well, I've never died before." 1
"Fun, huh?"2
"Yeah, it's not so bad."3
"Change of pace. You've always got me first, before."4
"I'd say you're a cat, but it would only explain nine of the times I've killed you."5
"Well, I finally got back at you."6
"Yeah...I guess we're both stuck like this now. Forever. Together."7
"Scary thought, isn't it?"8
"I agree. Then again, marriage never was good enough for you. You just HAD to be together forever. Emphasis on forever. You were starting to scare me."9
"Do I scare you now?"10
"Don't smile at me like that! The fangs are still hard to get used to."11
"Sorry."12
"It's fine."13
"So...now what?"14
"Same thing as always?"15
"I'll give you a head start, since you're new at this."16
"Good point. Five minutes?"17
"Fine with me. I'll get you this time... payback for the 15 or so times you've killed me!"18
"Not if I can help it. I'm off now, bye!"19
"See you soon. I love you!" 20
"I'll try to remember that while you're attempting to kill me. Love you too!"
Author notes
Hehehe...I had fun with this. I combined two or three of the lines, as well as adding in option 2 =) I like the dialogue only thing...I've never tried it before, although I had a contest centered around it once. I think I'll expand this later, maybe make a longer short story out of it. I really like the idea xD A vampire couple who's hobby is killing each other... Copywrite, ME! =D
As for my favourite author on SW, I have too many =P Trillian, for one. She's amazing, and she has the best ideas. She somehow manages to weave a bit of humour into her stories, and you just HAVE to keep reading! Amazing.
DoozerDan, cause he's awesome. He's really good at humour, and always keeps me laughing.
And the last one, Trenchmouth. She's been one of my favourite authors forever. She's simply amazing. Her stories are fantastic, I love them.
Sorry for the long as hell authors notes xD Oops?
~Aura ♥
A contest entry
- What smells like blue? by grey2dragon.
150 points, ended June 26, 2008, 4 entries
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Honorable mention
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Comments
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Hehe, these two characters cracked me up =D you got a good balance of their playfulness with a sort of old married couple vibe. I could easily tell what was going on, but you didn't try and make the plot really obvious which makes it all the more fun to read =D
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Amusing
Can anyone tell me why there are so many vampire stories on Storywrite?
This is an amusing piece, but I did sometimes get muddled about which character was speaking at any point. I know it’s tough with Dialog Only, but the characters do seem to lack differences in their “voices”. Still, it was certainly entertaining for such a short story.
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Hehe
Very enjoying! It was cool, different, short, and very sweet! The whole concept of vampires talking with only dialogue is astounding! The shortness also really made an impact! Excellent job! No boring moments for this awesome piece!
-Lissy 
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Ha. I liked this.
Confused me a bit in the beguinning though.
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This was fun to read and I loved it! Very well done!
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Loved it =) I like how they seem to love each other and want to kill each other at the same time xD keep it up!
~Dasha~
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Wow, this was a lot different--er (?) than I imagined! I do like how you didn't add any other details besides the dialog to make the reader imagine what was happening. Kudos for you on the originality!
My only itch with this was:
I think it's a little short. Even though it's just dialog I think that there should be a little more conversation. That's just my opinion.
Good read, hardly any grammar or spelling mistakes. (Truth be told, I didn't check for any. So your dialog flowed naturally!)
Good luck in the contests!
Cheers,
-VW
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