Warped Shadows: Character Overview

First section: Character Profile1

1. First Name- Leslie2

2. Last Name- Strine3

3. Age- 174

4. Gender- Female5

5. Species- Human6

6. Bodily Appearance- Multicolored eyes( brown and green eyes,7

Raven black hair that has blue streaks on top and underlying parts that goes down to the small of her back,8

Skinny but tall(6'0)9

A almost invisible but distinct scar on the right side of her face.10

7. Origin- Daughter of a King and a maiden servant, mother died at age seven. A hard past of being raped and abused by her father.11

8. Love Interest/s- Regan Vayne(her captor).12

9.LIKES-DISLIKES-   Likes & Dislikes- 13

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*- Adventure *- Drama15

*- Deceased Uncle * Father16

*-Guitar *- classical music17

*Piano *- Heavy Metal18

*Singing/ lyrics19

10: Virtues- Bravery- Sh may be afraid but she will face the conflict with her head held high.
Fear- She has fear, completing herself with the fear of a underlying fate.
loving- Can love all because she knows life's rules and regards.
generosity- She can give to those, who need.
Anger- a underlying current that is not seen often but is portrayed by memories.
11. Vices- A unknown secret , of how she killed a man.20

12. Ambition/Desire- To sing and write lyrics only for herself and not for money.21

13. Conflict- Leslie does not know whether to run or stay with her captor.22

14. Vocation/Calling- Singing and writing lyrics.23

15. Additional Notes- A seventeen year old with a like and no clue of what fate holds.24

Second section: A sample scene (100 - 400 words)-
It was odd, me being dressed up and in a very rushed manner sent to a Grand hall which I found had about eight different people in it. Not only was that odd but, how beautiful the room was to begin with. It looked like it should belong to someone in a palace. I felt something touch my shoulder, something that was rather cold but not freezing. I cringed away, scared half to death by someone touching me that I did not know, and just by the suddenness of it.
“Why do you cringe away like that? Why are you scared of us, we mean no harm to come of you?” I heard that voice as. The voice of my captor. No more than a whisper but still commanding. I stuttered, only somewhat. “Maybe because I was kidnapped for no purpose, no reason at all by someone who has probably just come of adulthood. Someone who will not tell me why I am here.” I was still scared but at least I had found the strength to speak I guess it did not matter arguing over it though because I knew I would never escape. Never to leave on my own again.
“Fine, it does not matter. Let us continue to the dining room. Where you shall meet my brothers who helped me as you call ‘kidnap you’. I hope you know how to eat like a lady.” The last part was muttered under his breath. I still heard it though and I was so far fueled by my anger I lifted my arm and hand and I slapped him straight across the face. The sound rang through the room. A red mark on his face, he turned to me with angry eyes and told me in a voice I never want to hear again. “Don’t ever hit me again”. I heard a growl deep in his voice and all of a sudden I was pushed against a wall.25

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Third Section: A link to your story27

http://storywrite.com/story/171434

Author notes

Finished. The link is to one of the chapters. The fifth chapter. This novel is not finished.

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  • tallblondie Greeters member
    September 19

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    Thank you for entering the contest 'Novels - Your Character' - I hope the contest has helped you understand your character better.

    Leslie appears to be a conflicted character - she has internal conflict - trying to find her past, and she also has external conflict - being captured would be hard on a character. The sample scene gave me a good point of reference for how she interacts with other characters.