Tears flowing down his cheeks, he brushed the hair from his long lost love's face...1
"I shall keep you forever, and nothing... nothing, will Ever take you away from me again..."2
Bending his face down, he sank his teeth into her neck and made her a new beginning... to a new life....
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Wow, for such a tiny story, this packs some punch.
Bravo on that! You have my interest!
-HT
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Wow. It was impressive considering the length you chose to make it and though the plot has been used so many times-I'm never tired of hearing it. This has story potential. Do you plan to make it into something bigger or keep it as it is?
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