Never give up ( Chapter 1)

"Please just go,Please!" I screamed.1

"Fuck no April, I am staying for what I came for."2

I tried to scream again but he reached behind him and grabbed a washcloth, putting it in my mouth. Tears began to stream down my face. I couldn't move for he had already tied me to the bed. He began kissing on my neck and biting every so harshly. 3

"Your tears taste wonderful April, I wonder what the rest of you tastes like." Cody said a he grinned.4

I tried so hard to get my hands free from the rope tied tightly around my wrists, I could feel them starting to burn from how hard I was trying to get away. Cody was now tearing away at my shirt and exposing my breasts. All I could do was watch him and cry. His hands kept going further down past my navel and trailing up and down my thigh. He started to undo my pants as I tried to squeeze my legs together. 5

" Bitch your gonna let me do this one way or another!" Cody screamed at me.6

I watched as he was pulling my pants down without even looking and biting down hard on my exposed nipple. I tried to break free out which only got me a slap in the face. 7

" April the more you fight back the more this is going to hurt." Cody told me8

I watched as he got up and undid the zipper on his pants. I kept crying and shaking my head trying to plead to him to stop, this wasn't right. Just as I was about to open my eyes I felt it. I could feel it rip deep inside me. All I could do was cry and and try to get this damn thing out of my mouth. I then thought...9

"Hey my legs aren't tied up maybe I can kick him off."10

I started moving around trying to kick him off which only pissed him off more. It also got me hit again and then again. Things began to get blurry and I didn't see what was coming. 11

" O.k April I warned you, I'm going to tear you apart you little Bitch!!" Cody screamed.12

He pulled out of me but just to lift my legs in the air. I couldn't tell what he was doing because I couldn't see and my head was throbbing from getting hit. Then I felt it, the most pain I have ever been in. The pain was stinging all the way up my spine. He had entered me from the back. 13

" Do you like that whore, I do, It's so tight in here,mmm." Cody said while forcefully ramming into me from behind.14

I could tell he was almost done and I was so pleased. His breathing was getting fasted and he was convulsing. Just when I thought this torture would end soon he stopped.15

"Didn't think I was done with you did you?"16

He grabbed something from behind him, I couldn't see what it was though until I felt a surging pain. It was a dildo, a thick one at that. While he had the dildo entering extremely hard in my crotch, he again entered me from behind. My eyes felt as if they were about to explode, I was in so much pain and I couldn't do anything. I started to see darkness right about the time Cody's movements became more forceful. Then all I remember is nothing but blackness.17

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I awoke what had seemed like hours later when really it had only been 10 minutes. Cody was gone and I was untied and had nothing in my mouth. I thought maybe it all was a bad dream until I had tried to get up. Pain shot through my entire body and I knew it had not been a dream. I seen blood trickle down my leg so I ran to the bathroom. I started to cry again. Why did I allow him to come over? Katelyn had warned me that he was bad news but how did she know? Did he do the same to her? Why hadn't she told? I felt so disgusting. I turned the faucet to the tub and got in cleansing myself from this filth. The water was a pink color because of the blood I was losing. After a while it had subsided and I finally relaxed. I almost was about to doze off when I heard a knock at the door. Quickly I jumped up and grabbed a robe,running downstairs to see who it was. I opened the door slowly and screamed.

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  • Much-Dipstick
    August 27, 2008

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    Wow, really good. Very well written, and kept me glued to the screen, wondering what would happen next! Brilliant write! I must go and read the next chapter. I have only one thing to point out. He gagged her, and then she screamed? Lol, I've made this mistake so many times. I just thought I'd better point it out. Other than that, this was great. Very few spelling or grammar errors, so great job! Keep it up, I'm off to read the next !


  • Violet Moodswing Greeters member
    June 16, 2008

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    Thanks for your entry. This is a very intense write. A real cliffhanger ending too.

    Good luck in the contest.


  • IntrepidFantasy Greeters member
    June 13, 2008

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    Wow, oh my gosh this was so well described and it made me gasp as I was reading the way you described this. Good luck in the contests, although as good as this is, I don't think you need luck. Poor thing, god I could feel her pain in this.
    ~Joann


  • juhi
    June 12, 2008
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    good attempt mira,keep it up . u r as good in prose as in ur poetry . good


  • Reaver gold member
    June 11, 2008

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    Very violent. gulp... just what i asked for Thanks for entering...you obviously have a good handle on this type of writing. Some of your structure is flawed and there are spelling blunders, but very well done. Will have to check out the next part...done yet?


  • Pray For Me
    June 11, 2008

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    This is really good. It kept my interest and made me keeping it until the end. Good job with this. Will you write more of this? I'd like to read more than you write it. You have me at the edge, wondering what's going to happen next. I wish you luck in the contests you entered this in.

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