If you walked around the streets of the nearest city, you would not wonder who the people in the black suits are, or what their life is like. If you saw a young woman in tight jeans and a tank top, you would not wonder where she has been in life, or what she may want to do.1
That is why you would be surprised when that teen walks up to you, and places her hands on your forhead. When you open your eyes, te woman is transformed. Instead of the cheap makeup and flare jeans, you would see a white, flowing dress that doesn't even look solid. You would see golden wings that look like pure light. Her face would be slightly tanned, and her hair a chesnut brown with a dark red top layer. Her eyes would be a brilliant green, and her lips form a perfect smile.2
When she leans down and kisses your forhead, you would feel warmth spread through your body and you close your eyes. When you open your eyes again, she is gone. When you see your city, your home, you would see things like never before. You feel compassion and love. You would wonder what the expressionless people that rush by you feel, what their lives were like. You would want to help the world.
Author notes
I'm not really that religious, but I put this as a starting topic in an RP and I thought that is was cool.
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This is a beautiful short story. I love how you described the woman, it was so vivid.
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Oooooo.....
Intresing for a short read. I like the way you had descriptions on that woman.
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this seems really cool actually really intriguing, like, waiting to hear more. Who is this person?! XD
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It's very well written and flows well. I like that it opens your mind to considering the possibilities and ideas that are out there. Nice job!
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Thanks for your entry. This is a very intriguing story and it opens the imagination to considering the possibilities.
Best of luck in the contest. Keep writing.
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Read this once. Very well done twice round
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Very well done...enjoyed this concept and the way you structured it. Sort of a 'make you think'er Very well done! Again. Enjoyed it throughout!
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Thanks for your comment! I sort of wrote it off the top of my head, and I liked it. I'm glad you did, too. Again, thanks for your comment!
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