Sweat, wine and paint.

Her old hands were shaking as she carefully held an old photograph. She couldn't believe that was her.
"So beautiful" said he, and kissed her gently, remembering the morning their fates were decided.  
"You are still beautiful, my love." 1

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"This may really be it", said she. 3

She talked to herself more than just often, it was just the regular thing to do.
It surprised many people, and endangered her as a specie but she was very attached to her own habits, just as all of her kind. 4

She walked back and forth nervously, muttering something that she and she alone could understand, and looking around for her bottle of wine. She was overexcited and wine would relax her enough for her to think clearly. It was her drug, though of course she wasn't alcoholic at all. Her mind was way too strong to be addicted to rotten grapes. 5

"Very old, rotten grapes that taste amazing" ...  she smiled, "One of the genius developments of the human race, a drink that you can master to drink, unless it masters you" 6

She found her bottle and came back to the sofa, staring at it. Smiling.
Her lean hands, and tan body were shining along with her eyes, as she eyed her masterpiece. 7


"But this one is really real, this this one is really true."8

This one may be why she was here. 9


She was glad that her search was done, she was glad she didnt have to fix anything this time. 10

Her dark hair was unruly, and it disturbed her as she was trying to wipe off the sweat from her forehead, forgetting that her hands are covered with paint, and wine. It was a very hot day, and her T-shirt was already the lightest thing she could find in her house. She sat down calmly, feeling the warmth of wine move around her body, hitting her head with warm streams of circulating blood. It was getting hotter. Heat was deadly, and it was a sign that her time was coming, time for her to leave. 11

"He is handsome", she thought, "it's my luck."12

Suddenly her masterpiece began to wake up. 13

She liked to see his muscles tense as he opened his eyes, and how quickly he rose to sit up, realizing where he was.She admired his body, his masculinity once more.
He looked at her carefully, and for long, as if thinking, considering if it were all a dream, if it still was.14

If they really met yesterday. 15

If she was really what she was. If he really loved her. 16

If he really was her reason. 17

If they really were. 18

After a momentary stupor he suddenly realized that he was completely naked, and as he struggled to force his memory to tell him whether he'd done anything stupid last night, his eyes were fruitlessly searching for his clothes. 19

"Sex would be the last thing to do first, this is serious buddy" he thought. 20

"As if it matters" said she, as if she read his thoughts.
But she didn't need to read them, she could simply think them. 21

He then realized she was simply looking at him, admiring. Studying. She had that look in her eyes, the type a woman has when the man she loves is doing something silly. Something pointless. At a time when she knows more. 22

He looked at his feet and saw that they were all covered in paint, beautiful strikes of designs, colors. He knew what this meant. 23

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He was her reason to come here, her goal, her search. She was his reason to live, to be born.25

He only knew this yesterday when he saw her eyes. He knew everything when he saw those two lights inside them. 26

And he would have to leave, with her to her planet.
He knew he loved this woman his entire life, his entire existence, because they had once been one. 27

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Author notes

Just some fantasy i guess.
I thought that if soulmates do exist, then why should they be on only our planet. I think we were all scattered around the universe at some point.
To find your half on the same planet must be great luck.
But what if lives on other planets already understood what love is, what if they know they have to find theirs. What if they found out that this is the meaning of life, then perhaps some would be coming here to find it.
I really dont know how this came out.
I really dont know if this makes sense.
you could take it that way, the , love search way.. but if you look at it from a different angle, you could take all the words of opther planets and aliens as metaphors, and you will see that there isnt anything so weird in here.. sometimes people just realize they are in love. sometimes it only takes a day. and going with the person you love to their lives and entering their history is equivalent to changing planets.
eleno

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  • September Daydreams
    August 8, 2008

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    Beautiful

    Maybe this lines aren't enough for describing your style.Honestly i liked it,i felt like finding a part of me there.Sometimes i feel like i want to make "an angel" to take care of me,a masterpiece just like yours .Maybe the others don't belive but i do .You've chose another Planet so they could love each other .In my opinion eveybody can create it's own world.A world made of our things .
    If it was for me i would write an entire page,because i feel like that too ,with a little diffrence i wanna call them "Snowangels"

  • sassykitty
    June 15, 2008

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    I really like this and can so relate to it. It so makes sense as it's true we all have a genuine soul mate- I've written about mine in a lot of poetry - but the truth is I wouldn't be writing without his inspiration, he's my muse. Felt the part 'suddenly her masterpiece woke up' was extremely effective and struck me as totally original. The communication of feelings work well and the narrative is also successful. Good luck in the contest - I've entered it too but I like your story better than mine!


  • Reaver Greeters member
    June 12, 2008

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    If not for the authors note, i would have been lost. But that could just be my issues. It was on the other hand, written very well. You structured it well, but the flow was off, hense the confusion. THanks for entering, I enjoyed reading.

  • sunshinexreggae
    June 12, 2008

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    That's a little different ^_^

    Hm... hmmmm.
    I was a little confused, the author notes helped a lot .
    It was very abstract, but that's a good thing. I like abstract minds
    I liked it, it sounded more like a dream to me.
    Somewhat unclear but with great detail.
    Interesting <3

    Good luck! ^^
    xoxo

  • sunshinexreggae
    June 10, 2008
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    Yay! Hello :)

    Hello hello ^^
    Thank you very much for entering my contest ^^
    Here's your picture, if the URL doesn't work, try to copy and paste it into your address bar

    http://blog.tenbit.pl/i/blog/upload/notes/b/bananowe_obrazki_xd/15463.jpg

    If it still doesn't work, let me know and I'll sort it out .
    ^^
    What else can I say? Basically have fun and be as creative as you wish, remember to have no limits in your imagination ^^
    Love!
    xoxo

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