Have you ever been betrayed?
When their trust for you just faded away
You think about them all day
And now in the corner of darkness, this is where you want to stay1
Their words cut like a spear
And now you cower with fear
All day this is what you have to hear
And now anger is drawing near2
As they come near, they would always smile
But that was the past, now it isn't their style3
You try not to look in thier eyes 4
But you get so nervous like if you were on trial5
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Your friendship was harder than rock7
Higher than a skyscraper, and now they won't even talk8
Watching the sunset go down and you are still in shock9
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Everything was fine11
Betry, stabbing you in the back was a big sign 12
You guys used to shine so bright13
Now it looks like it's the end of the line14
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Showing thier fangs like a dog, and eyes red16
Rumors that they would always spread17
Friendship only hanging by a thread18
And now you pray everynight, hoping that everything would go away Before you go to bed19
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Sitting all alone, hoping they would come back21
Talk to them hopefully in a nice way they would react22
Did you ever have a friend that would hurt you and keep you off track?23
Did your friend's heart suddenly turn black?24
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Comments
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do i have to really ask?
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o my gosh. I loved it! you could tell that it was thought out and so perfect you didnt just whip it up in 10 min. Good job!!! so sad also
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Crud this hit home. My friend Kitty who I thought was my best friend forever all out of the blue stopped talking to me and her heart turned black..-_-
She as told people That im a druggie. and some other things..>_>
xXAlexisXx
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Wow...thats deep man..
This made me think...I don't normally think, but this really made me think deeply about a situation. =/ Wow...good write though...loved it. Keep up the good work. I can tell there is some story behind it, but I just don't know.
~Ashley~
beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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