This may not look interesting or exciting but this is how my life changed.1
“I wish I could talk to her!” I thought when I saw one, no the only hot chick in the whole school who was only in year 9.2
Sorry how rude am I? Hi, I’m Toni White. I am 16 and still in yr 10. I am a full blood lesbian and no one knows. Not even my best mate who I’ve known since birth can even tell. Now back to the story.3
Beep! Beep! Beep! As I role over I hit the snooze button for the tenth time. As I slowly open my eyes I realize that I’ve been dreaming of her again. As I sit up I hear mum yell something before the front door slams behind her. I slowly swing my legs over the side of my bed and jump down. Mum and I have been living by ourselves sin I was 6. As I walk down the stairs I try to remember what I dreamt and why I had a nicely made wet patch on the front of my pants. I know that I was dreaming about her and how much I love but I thought I was over the dreaming stage. I haven’t dreamt about her in over 3 months. Why now?4
Ok here’s the low down on my beautiful love girl. Her names Teaire Ann. She has long black hair and she always wears it in a ponytail. She has black glasses which I think make her even sexier then anyone can imagine. She wears only cargo pants and tight tops all in black. Her skin is as pale as the moon and her body is as slim as a twig.5
As I went to check the time I wished I could get her off my mind. “Fuck!” I am running late for school. It was 8.30 am and I still had to get the package for Mark and walk for half an hour just to get to school. When I got to school Mark was waiting at my locker for me. “Oi, Toni, you dick! Where have you been and where is it?? I needed it before the end of school!” That’s all I got before the bell went. As we walked to our first class I explained what had happened and why I didn’t have his package. Mark looked at me with a cheeky grin which only meant one thing was coming next. 6
“Toni has a crush!! Toni has a crush!! Oh this is so sweet.” 7
“Now Mark who would I have a crush on? You? I don’t think so, your girlfriend might have a problem 8
with that!”9
“You think she would care? I mean at the moment I think she’s to busy to even notice what’s going on!”10
I couldn’t think of anything to say to him. 11
“Well? Toni! Earth to Toni! Toni anyone home?”12
“What? Oh sorry Mark but I have to go. I’ll see you at lunch! Bye!”13
As I walked down the crowded hall way all I could think was that I had gotten myself into something that I shouldn’t of.14
Author notes
This is the fist real story I've written so please be nice...There is more to come...Just have to finish it.
Please tell me what you think
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Good job baby! It is good, very good, I like reading it...
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Cool! Awesome, I'm glad i decided to take a look at your stuff. I don't have long enough to look through anything else, but i like your writing style, and this is a good start to a story. I'd look forward to reading more of it, and I like the descriptions. Found a typo in paragraph 4, it says 'Mum and I have been living by ourselves sin I was 6.'... should be since? And paragraph ten, should be 'too busy' instead of 'to busy'. But these were the only errors i found and they're minor ones. Thanks very much for an interesting beginning and a nicely flowing read!
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Hmm...I think you should write more of this story. It's pretty good so far, but I like long stories more and the deeper that a story is, the better.
I enjoyed this part of it...and I will be looking forward to the other parts as they come along. I can't wait until the first person tells it to her best friend. I think it should be interesting to see how you do it.
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a good read so far, i'd like to see how it turns out and all, hey, nice pic bob, lol...
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wow this is good and I cant wait for more!
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I WANT MORE NOW
I can so connect with this I loved it pleasssse write more...
I liked how she cannot admit it just yet ... it makes it suspenseful yet she confesses it to her readers.
Rock on
... Go lesbians ^.^ (ish one)
I wanna know more about mark...
It is so funny my first lesbain series was called Perry chasity in the beginning ...
Blair
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thankz...i promise you ill try to get it finished tonight or something.
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