First Pleasures

As I drifted off to sleep, I awoke somewhere else that I had never seen.  I walked through a dark hall, heading toward a dim red lighted room.  With each step, my heart pounded faster, making me move quicker to find out exactly what I was missing.1

When I reached the room, I noticed on the floor were rose petals, whose aroma made the room smell sweet and sensual.  I looked over to the neatly made bed, and slowly walked to it, shivering.  When I reached it, I sat gently onto the crushed scarlet velvet, and laid myself down.  I watched the door for a moment, then I looked about the room.  There were a dozen flaming candles all different sizes, lit to make the room's redness shimmer across the walls.  Their wax dripped slowly onto metal plates that took the waxes heat and cooled it into a pool that looked as if it were blood.2

I turned my face back toward the door, and saw a man standing in the shadows.  He noticed that I had seen him, and made his way over to the bed.  I couldn't see his face, he kept to the shadows like a black cat.  But, as he got closer, I realized he was naked and that his muscle toned body was aching to become one with mine.  3

With his face still in shadows, the man stopped right beside the bed I was laying on.  He knelt down and whispered into my ear, “I’m going to make you mine...”.  His fingers touched my nightgown and began to peel it gently off of my shoulders.  He stopped, teasingly just before my hardening breasts and kissed my naked shoulder.  He kissed gently and then bit hard into my skin, piercing it like a vampire dying for blood.  I let out a quiet scream.  He looked at me grinning, and again whispered, “I’m going to make you mine...”.  He started to remove my nightgown again, this time stopping right below my navel.  He caressed my breasts into his hands.  4

But instead of licking my nipples like they were begging him too, he pulled out a rope letting go of my breasts.  He gently took my left arm and placed it above my body.  Then he grabbed my other arm and placed it above my head, crossing it over my left arm.  He tied them to the head of the bed tightly then climbed gently atop me.5

His left hand rested on one of my breasts as his right one went slowly down my body.  He reached the bottom of my gown and started to lift it slowly.  He stopped right before my thigh and then ran his hand back down my leg.  I shivered in excitement.  I knew what I wanted him to do.  6

I wanted him to lift my gown up or take it off and have me right there on the velvet bed.  But he had other plans.7

His hand brushed off my leg, and reached on the side of the bed.  He lifted up a piece of cloth and dangled it in my view.  He leaned over my face and kissed me passionately on the lips as my vision was being blocked by the blind fold.  Now, my sense of sight was taken, my sense of touch was becoming more alive.8

After kissing my lips, I felt him pick something else up.  He brushed it across my chest and it felt like another piece of cloth.  “You’ll be mine.” He whispered as he kissed me.  His fingers gently touched my lower lip making it quiver for his to be on it again.  As he draped the cloth into my mouth, I realized that I now had no voice to give now.9

I felt his body lower closer to mine.  His warm chest touched my breasts and I felt myself begging for him to be in me.  But, he wasn’t done playing with me yet.  With a gentle glide of his fingers up my thigh, part of him crept into my needy body.  I could feel his fingers come in and out of me and then I felt him move down further.  I felt wet fingers spread my legs apart as his head went between my dripping pussy.  I could feel inside me the emotions I wanted to scream but could only moan, as he used his slippery tongue of saliva and my own wetness to fuck me.  His hands were now holding onto my thighs as he went in and out of me.  I moaned louder, filled with ecstasy.  I wanted him.  I wanted to pleasure him.  But, instead of allowing me to do anything but moan, he grabbed harder and went in further.  Again and again, until I was moaning so loudly I was sure I’d orgasm soon and ruin the moment.10

But, before I could let out what could’ve been my final moan, he removed his tongue from me.  He worked his way back up my body, kissing and licking body parts as he came.  Finally, when he was up near my chest, I felt his gigantic cock creep into me.11

He toyed with me at first.  Going in halfway and then popping back out.  He kissed my neck when he did this, making me shiver at the sudden change of ecstasies.   He felt my entire body, draping his fingers on every part that made me tingle just right with new delighting feelings.12

Finally, he went fully inside me, and started to breathe heavier as he worked his way to my insides.  I felt him moving on me, going in further.  I moaned as he hit a point that made my entire body explode.  He moaned at the same time.  I felt his throbbing inside me.  I felt as he tensed and I felt how he started to grab my thighs, making him come into me more.  Finally, my body quivered with the orgasm, I was beginning to moan out.13

After our movements became perfectly one, he released himself into me with a final whisper, "You are mine now." He left me lying naked on that velvet bed, and I awoke happily in my own room still coming off of my first pleasurable dream.14

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Okay, umm yeah. My first attempt at something erotic. Don't smack me with an vegan muffins!

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  • September 20, 2005
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    DANG LEAH!!!! I am reading this at school and i think i need to go to the bathroom for a little while...LMFAO wow that was awesome great write

  • asymmetry
    March 4, 2005
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    Very nice story.. I started having wet dreams at the age of 13. and ever since, they've always been part of my dreams.
    I also wrote my first erotica story a couple of days ago. It's called The Encounter, stop by my page and read it if you have time. I'm really surprised that erotica gets so much attention, within two days about 50 people have read my story, without even promoting it. But most don't leave a comment.

  • Leah Rose
    February 7, 2005
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    Thank you for the comment...you were the only person to comment out of using the featured box. Thanks.
    Hearts,
    Miseria....

    Glad you enjoyed it...hehe...I know it's really enjoyable thinking of yourself being in the position.


  • February 7, 2005
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    very enjoyable

    This is a great piece of work. It made me shiver it is awsome. I felt as if I were there in that bed, me just dreaming sorry. haha He tied them to the head of the bed then got on top of ME, more more please excuse me i enjoyed this so much.I would applaud it but I have none left,I will be back.


  • January 31, 2005
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    DAMN LEAH!!! THIS IS AWESOME! I don't read erotica much either..but this is GREAT! Now I think I need to get laid! LMAO!! You rock girl. Keep it up! You just showed that you can write ANYTHING good!

    twizted bizkit


  • January 30, 2005
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    Damn, that was an extremely good write... I usually don't like erotica but this piece was just amazingly written and drew the reader completely in. Thanks for sharing and keep up the great erotica!

    -Larry


  • January 30, 2005
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    its really good ... and most erotic pieces seem trashy ... but this one didnt .... i liked it ... keep it up
    rock on
    amby


  • January 30, 2005
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    really good i loved it tying people up has always seemed like fun lol I really enjoyed reading this coz it has alot of the stuff id want to do in it aweomse write well done Becca xxxx


  • January 30, 2005
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    a nice eloquent type of love-making..filled with serenity and passion. An example of good erotica.


  • January 30, 2005
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    it was very good and i enjoyed reading it.


  • January 30, 2005
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    wonderful

    wow.....wot can i say it was gr8!

  • november ethereal
    January 30, 2005
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    *gets fan to cool herself off even though it's snowing outside* Ohh, that was amazing, hon. Really appealing to me, since I find those surroundings and the idea of having sex with this mystery man incredibly hot. Loved it, babe. I totally commend your first attempt, and encourage more. Very well-written, I'm going to go with what Shades said and *confirm* that there are no mistakes, lol.
    Oddly enough, I just posted my first "erotica" story - shits and giggles for a contest. And since you seem to relate to the whole *nervousness*, maybe you could drop a comment on my story, "Hitchhiker in the Rain"? It'd be greatly appriciated.
    Absolutely LOVED!!! your story. Unbelivably sexy.

  • shadesofnothing
    January 30, 2005
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    I wont smack you with no muffin. It was grand! I love to see when people are experimenting with new types of writing its awesome. I didn't notice any mistakes but its 1 am so yeah lol. Later, Ill reread after some sleep and see if i note any.

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